rate_review Reviews

This was pretty cute. ^^ I enjoyed it.
~leaf~

Really enjoyed your story -- good suspense, great lemon, an excellent read!!

I love it! It's a great story ^^

I wish I could write like you :>

What, 5 reviews?! This fic is worth so much more =/

Great job!

I love the story, but I'd kinda like to see some development between Irvine/Selphie and Seifer/Quistis too. You mentioned Irvines insecurities with Selphie leaving him if he couldn't say he loved her, and Quistis' infactuation with Seifer, but the ends haven't been tied off...yanno?

This is such a good piece of work. I really like the fact that you don’t just let it go crazy and have them humping all the time at the end. You took time to look at the affects of their actions and their new relationship.
You made the characters very human and I think this is the reason this Fanfic is so strong. While I was reading it I kept thinking it was going to have a twist at the end where it turned out that Ellone never cast the spell and Squall did all that on his own, but I like your way more. It meant that it didn’t have an easily tied up ending and gave the ending much more meaning.
All in all very good work and looking forwards to seeing more of you work.

that was soo good. too bad squall and zell are sufferung from the morning after feelings. it cant wait to see your next update.

Okay - I'm hooked, and I want more - I want to know what happens, and Seifer bringing Ellone in ---- damn. Please finish this.

*hearts hearts hearts* You rock so much! I can't wait to read the end!