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May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good story :D im usually not keen on the whole male on male stories especially not Balthier/Vaan..
but for a male on male story i have to admit i actually enjoyed reading this :D you did a really good job keeping the characters "in character" it seems that many have a hard time doing so especially when it comes to Balthier..
I really like your language through the whole story it was very clean compared to many other stories i have read.. but its the cool kind of clean :D no filth words in the middle of a very "perfect" line or anything that was fabulous!
I must say i hope you make more great stories.. and some that might even have male/female fun x]
anyway.. basically i liked everything about this story and i want to see more ^O^
but for a male on male story i have to admit i actually enjoyed reading this :D you did a really good job keeping the characters "in character" it seems that many have a hard time doing so especially when it comes to Balthier..
I really like your language through the whole story it was very clean compared to many other stories i have read.. but its the cool kind of clean :D no filth words in the middle of a very "perfect" line or anything that was fabulous!
I must say i hope you make more great stories.. and some that might even have male/female fun x]
anyway.. basically i liked everything about this story and i want to see more ^O^
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* You know how to write a fanfic! Please, PLEASE continue this!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I THINK I LOVE YOU! Super awesome! <3
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god... now THAT was fucking hot! *drools and runs off to play FFXII once more*
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... ... ... That was so fucking hot. XD I LOVE how much he teased him. Mmm.
D: But it was so sad at the same time.. aaaaawhh..
D: But it was so sad at the same time.. aaaaawhh..
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!*smiles*
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic! Maybe you could do a follow up from the point where they are "re-united" in the game? I don't want to spoil it for you if you haven't played it yet.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even if I loved Visions, this is my favourite. I read this one last night and I wanted to leave a comment saying how much I loved it. Your writting is amazing as is your depiction of the character's personalities. I love Basch/Balthier but your fics made me love this pair even more. :)
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was different than the other story. The way how commited they were I mean. This was really sexy, it wasn't THAT much of a PWP, haha even if it was, it was a very very steamy hot PWP. I like. But the ending is really depressing I must admit but I also do like the reality of the situation. Did I make sense? Haha. You're a very good writer and I am in love with your stories! Great job!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this was probably the best written yaoi fic I have ever read ._.
I bow to your mastery of the english language m(_ _)m
I bow to your mastery of the english language m(_ _)m