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Wow, your story is so steamy, and incredibly well-written! I completely ADORE Balthier in the game. The mix of refined, mature composure just barely covering all that fire and mischief! I think you captured his character perfectly. Your Basch is so captivating too! All mysterious and stoic and brooding and CALCULATING. SO much better than in-game Basch, who I can't imagine doing anything besides standing around awkwardly and thinking about battle strategies or 101 different ways to serve Dalmasca. I'm not very far in the game, so maybe he'll get better. I've only just had the scuffle with Daddy Cid.

I REALLY enjoyed your story (especially chapter 2!) Hope you continue to write more!

I'm currently playing FFXII and I'm in love with Capt Basch and Sky Pirate Balthier. :D So I came to adultfanfiction in the (little) hopes to find a Basch/Balthier fic and was happy to find this one. I have enjoyed it very much. I especially love their moments together in bed, your writting is magnificent, full of details just like I love it.


Thank you for writting this fanfiction. :)

This was clever, funny, very sexy and hot, and so interesting to read! I didn't get bored reading this one bit. You had me giggling like a little school girl and you made me very much interested in this coupling now! This is now one of my favorite stories I've read in a while. Please continue soon I think I'll go crazy if I don't read more!

Ah.. such.. a good.. writer.. rawr.

The depth of your insight to the characters is amazing. I also liked how you worked in the gameplay as... talking.. and stuff. Basch was always the first to die.. - -;;



Anyways, I hope you write alot more stories ^^