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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely one of my favorite Bal/Pen Lemons. Its very well written and highly enjoyable. In short, you did a wonderful job with it.
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic, simply fantastic. It was well written, the grammer was perfect, and it was very enjoyable. I think you did a wonderful job. The characters were also portraid wonderfully. I especially like how you ended it with a mention of Balthier trying to convince himself of his feelings(or lack of) for Penelo.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I loved it! :D
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and here I had pretty much given up on finding a Balthier/Penelo fic! So what is this, like, the only one? Well at least its a good story. It seems like it was meant to have more chapters but it doesn't. No plans to continue? Thats too bad. Nice work- very sexy!
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. A nice piece, a nice pairing. I didn't actually imagine Balthier & Penelo before reading. More please? :P
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, a bit late for me to review,but in my opinion, it was one of the best stories of this topic(FFXII) I have come across in my endless venture of this abyssal plain we call the internet. Although it lacked a strong plotline, the way it was written gave the illusion of an interesting series of events leading up to the main scene. So, basically, we got the goods, but without the work.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ricky is, as ever, the fool.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic, manages to nail Balthier's character perfectly and Penelo's pretty well. I'd love to see these two paired up again, either in a direct sequel or an unrelated fic, as I haven't really seen the pairing anywhere else and you do it quite well. Keep writing!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. You kept Balthier delightfully in-character, and I'm afraid that I'd love to see more. xD
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Typical generic smut. Very boring.