rate_review Reviews

Here from the B/P Fairytale site. I really enjoyed this story. You don't find a lot of Balthier/Penelo fics out there, and this is one of my faves so far. I'd love to see a sequel or a continuation, since it seems to me that Balthier is going to have to deal with the shortcomings in his rules. I'd love to see him lose control of himself and the situation. But, anyway, nice job!

I just got done with the game and I must say you did a damn good job of Balthier! Excellent! I give you snaps! Can't wait for the next chapter, Keep up the good work.

Oh wow, this story is really great. Very intense. It's wonderful to see Balthier/Penelo lemons. And judging from the date on your story, it's certainly one of the first B/P stories to emerge on the net. Good job! I was also wondering if you would allow me to post this story on my Balthier/Penelo shrine (not sure if aff.net allows you to post url's in reviews, but I'll try): http://one-sky.org/fairytale I would of course give you full credit. If I have your permission, please e-mail me to let me know. If not, I completely understand. :D Either way, keep up the good work!

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That's my review on the matter.

Far better than the wannabe MSTer gives it credit for (that's some of the lamest riffing I've ever seen, by the way). A few grammatical bumps here and there, but the readability and enthusiasm completely make up for them. Fine story- one of the few instances where smut actually makes sense to me.

You just made my dreams come true.

Thank you for writing this. XD

I'd love another chapter, but it just seems so fitting as a one shot too.

I would love to find out if he can actually keep his promise - I don't think so. Very nicely written.

It's not an abortion if the egg never gets fertilized by the sperm, you nut-job. Do you go around accusing women of getting an abortion when their unfertilized eggs get discharged once a month?

God. Balthier is soo hot. XD I wish he would seduce me!

Anyways, wonderful job! I felt it was really in character, especially for Balthier.

<3

I really enjoyed this, are you planning to write more?