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for Desire & Existence

by KiaraExodus

schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Right. I should hopefully have a new chapter within the next week, and it'll have some PLOT! YaY!! :D
person Klebkatt
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eee! Thank you very much for taking up my challenge. ^^ I was kinda suprised that Quistis appeared.

This is a good first try. Let me know when you update! ^^

Kleb
person lisa
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks honey, this means a lot! I've changed it to NC-17 (I'm from England and have no idea what that means XD)

I'll write another chapter with your guidelines in mind. Thanks very much for your help xxx
person Sharon
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This shouldn't be rated R. It's definitely NC17.

Other than that, it's a very underdone pairing, though not wholly unique. The chapter was rather short and entirely PWP, which isn't a problem if it was meant to be like a oneshot or something short like that. Anyway, Seifer's an awesome character to work with, so good luck on future chapters... and remember to do the other characters justice if you have them not being controlled or written in a dream.