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Please don't tell me this is abandoned!

I must say, I'm disappointed. I read through chapter three, but Seymour Guado is so out of character, it pains me. Not because you don't want to follow his character arc of him being the manipulator that he is, but because of the purposeful blindness you've placed on him. Seymour is not a stupid man. I thought it'd be hilarious for him to believe Yuna to be his mate, only for it to be Tidus. But then, you made mating with a Guado have very specific symptoms, of which only one person in the group had, and yet he can't figure out who his mate is. If he was fairly certain by the scent that had come to him before, therefore knows that it's in that group, how had he not figured out it was Tidus yet? Forgiving that, if he just needs to get a scent of him, but "the scent of the Farplane" was too strong about him, he'd know where that scent was coming from, so why would he ask AURON to stay with them at all times. There are FOUR other people there who could have served as chaperones. The motivation is simply not thought out, and only there to drag the story out longer than it needs to be. You read a story for plot advancement, not to see the same line of "Oh, I wonder who my mate is? Can't possibly be the only one here with mating sickness, nope nope nope!"

Weird a seymourxtidus fic that isn't freakishly dark noncon. at least yet. Please don't go freakishly dark! Update soon

wow i just noticed its been 3 years since you last updated it...i didnt notice cause i was too wrapped up in reading this story which i think is really interesting and would really like to see what happens...hope you update soon

dude i love the story, you have to continue it, please? i wanna know what happens next....please please please please pretty please with sugar on top?
*hands you a cookie as a bribe for the continuation of the story*

love it. Hope there will be more.

there is so not enough seymourTidus and i loved it^^ update ASAP

Sweet story! can't wait for the next chapter!

i really really enjoy this story. a whole lot! but you havent updated in almost a year if not over a year. have you given up on this story? i truly hope not!!!

Nicely done! A really catchy story~~~ hope you continue soon!!