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Whoo, the excellence continues! =D Ooo, both scenarios sound really good but, I'm leaning towards scenario two more -- it sounds more appealing ... and I'd like to see Seymour have a clue. XD Either way, I look forward to more chapters! n.n

When I first started reading this story, I thought it might be basically pwp, or sex with a bad excuse of plot, but I really got intrigued!I can't wait until the next chapter ... I loooove Seymour x Tidus so much! I hate how most ST fics are rape fics with Tidus madly in love with auron. Ah, this fic is so refreashing to the FFX fandom, as theres only really two other really good stories around. Anyway, the only problems I saw was the little errors here and there because you didn't have access to Word - if you get the chance, you should run those chapters through Word to fix all those little errors.

Anyway, I like the first scenario better, will create more drama I think ^^ ... though I'm a little surprised Seymour didn't connect the dots...perhaps this 'mating heat' hes going through affects his logical side or something? It would make better sense that the urge to find their partner would cloud their senses, because I kinda doubt the conniving seymour would not connect the dots at all. But i dunno, I'm sure which ever way you do it will work out. Until next time.

YAY! you updated! and its getting good too. cant wait for the next part.

scenario two seems more likely. but no.1 seems so interresting...hm..no more drama. i vote scenario no.2!...plz!

I say Scenario two would be better than one. Scenario two plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i beg of you(goes on knees and begs)

I vote for scenario two, because Seymour's obliviousness is just killing me right now.

Woowwww atlast i found a Seymour/Tidus fic without rape in it and this fic promises to be a great one so please keep updatin I can;t wait for the look on Seymour's face when he realise who is his intended. Lol

Update soon Please and Thank You.

Ai Always

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Silvara-Kun

come now Seymore you now who your mate is XP...update soon

i like the idea for this story please update soon i cant wait to read more.^_^

YAY! Seymour found Tidus! oh, PLEASE update soon!