rate_review Reviews

this one of the best I've read of it's kind- I was sad to see the seduction over- But, you made the end well-
The way you wrote Cloud's resistance and his submission to Sephiroth perfect-

Thank you-

This was awesome, i really liked that twist.
If it is a story where they don't kill each other,
it's normally somethig sugarsweet happy ending.
Not that i don't like them, it's just so great to read something
new.

I absolutely loved this fic. You don't even understand, I've read it like three times. I feel that you've honestly captured how I believe Seph and Cloud would really act (in the sack and otherwise).

I would LOVE to see more out of you about these two, they're above and beyond my favorite yaoi couple. And the way you write thier dynamic is so sexy and giggle-tastic.

Please, don't stop writing about them! More! More! More! Unng...

I love this one of yours.
Today, while at work, I decided that I must attempt to persuade you to write a sequel.."The Diabolical and Sinister Adventures of Sephiroth and Cloud" - or something to that effect hahaha! It would be absolutely wonderful! Perhaps a bit of the story told through the eyes of the victims of the worlds they come upon? Perhaps a Like-Cloud-When-He-Was-A-Hero sort of new character that rises to stop them? Perhaps some renewed internal conflict in Strife? Oh my! You know you'd like to - I think you could pull it off beautifully, if the idea appeals to you. Don't know. Had to try!
Have a good night.
Savannah.

Very, dark. I like it. I personally think Cloud would have refused to help, but not trying to stop Sephy (yes I klnow, bad nick name) either. I think it would take a little longer before he finally joined Sephiroth in the destruction. Maybe 2 or three more worlds.
Actually, I have one more ending you could have used. Aeris gives Cloud the gift, he kills Sephiroth, but remains on the planet, alone for all eternity. Anyway, great story.

Evil Cloud turns me on...

i love your story. it had the most perfect ending ever. lol we need more evil
anyway, that's how i'd end it too.
thanx

Yes, yes, yes....PLEASE let it be the Final Fantasy 9 world they destroyed...I HATED that game...

But I LOVED this story...hehe...very...yum...can't really describe it any other way...I rather enjoyed the corrupted Cloud, as well...*grins*

I think this fanfic ended beautifully. It's a great dark ending to a wonderfully dark theme! I wouldn't have it any other way. I really enjoyed reading your fanfic, and I always anticipated the updates. You're writing is wonderful, please keep it up!

I love it!

I totally agree with you about the ending! I always wanted to see a dark Cloud. I love it! I have no complaints. lol. The other two alter endings I agree would be too brutal or sappy for our favorite yaoi pair :)

I think it was nicely done and hope to read more of your work in the future. Especially a Sephiroth and Cloud fic. O