schedule
April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey chick - I knew it would be good and you don't ever disappoint. I happen to like the ending you had always planned to do, and I'm very glad you followed your heart and wrote this for you. Wonderful - and I happen to agree - FF IX was the worst - and I'm quite happy with the thought of Richard Scarry runs amuck is history.
schedule
April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rawrgh, that was so raw and sad. *sniff* but good in a dark way. a disturbing but powerful ending. *sniff sniff sniff* I'll look forward to your next story! :D :D
schedule
March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting - not that it wasn't before, but now even more so. I love the way you torment Cloud with all these choices, but I have to wonder if he'll make the right one.
schedule
March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I just had another thought about the Cloud/Sephiroth tango that you have going here... It sort of reminds me of the dynamic between Elizabeth Turner and Cap'n Jack Sparrow in Dead Man's Chest - yes, that kissing scene, LOL! Although much, much darker of course. Not that Cloud is a virgin in the physical sense, but in terms of morality and sin, he deffo is. Sephiroth/Jack Sparrow on the other hand, they're total friggin' sluts. LAWLS!
schedule
March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You updated!!! I'm SOOOOO happy!!! I really cant wait for more I check for updates every day!!! I cant wait to read more!! Update Soon!!!
schedule
March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Opps made a mistake, so I'll review again!!
I like the theme of Cloud's humanity battling with his desire coming out. Nice, gradual, plausible buildup. 'Specially liked the bit where he remembers his loved ones but can no longer feel as much as he used to. So sad. *Sniff* Sephy is soooo evil, but it wouldn't be right if he weren't. *Sobs* for the destruction of Cloud's humanity. He gets beat up and tossed around an awful lot on AFF, doesn't he LOL? I'm guilty of it too. :p
Yessssssssssssssssss FIVES STARS momma! Morrrrrrre!
I like the theme of Cloud's humanity battling with his desire coming out. Nice, gradual, plausible buildup. 'Specially liked the bit where he remembers his loved ones but can no longer feel as much as he used to. So sad. *Sniff* Sephy is soooo evil, but it wouldn't be right if he weren't. *Sobs* for the destruction of Cloud's humanity. He gets beat up and tossed around an awful lot on AFF, doesn't he LOL? I'm guilty of it too. :p
Yessssssssssssssssss FIVES STARS momma! Morrrrrrre!
schedule
March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Your writing is brilliant, there are some instances though that you need to be a litle more specific when it comes down to the he's and him's. lol, cuz you confused me a couple times. lol. other than that it is wonderfully writting and I can't wait for an update. I really hope you update soon. PLEASE!!!
schedule
March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh a portal to another dimension! yay!
schedule
March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, cliffhanger. I can't wait to find out what the vortex is about. Cloud is starting to actually enjoy the fact that he is enjoying himself... Ooooh naughty.
5 starz!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D
5 starz!!!!!!!!!!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!
:D :D
schedule
March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering just what the hell Sephiroth has cooked up in that little portal of his, and it hurts my heart that Cloud's having such a hard time coming to terms with his feelings. But if he didn't have a hard time with it he wouldn't be Cloud, right?