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for Case of Cloud

by FaTaLfURy

person Si
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay - is this actually going to be a Cloud and Tifa story that doesn't competely suck? I'm so proud, and excited for more!
person Sasha
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think they are very ooc, since Cloud promised Denzel to come back home, his burden was taken away(he got his forgivness he was looking for) and he would never let Tifa alone. And btw, I think it's not very Tifaish to drink wine alone.
person Yami Trixie
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM

To Sasha, I feel the need to go against your review because you’re a moron.

First off, the fic is called the CASE of Cloud. If you would understand that the writer has wrote this before Cloud found his forgiveness. S.E released three stories. One was Tifa’s POV but there was no Cloud. The writer is doing Cloud’s POV. This takes place before AC, so he hasn’t told Denzel he’d come home because write now in the fic he’s left them.


Tifa drinking wine alone? It's hard to say as long as she's not a drunk I can't see why I glass of wine to herself is OOC.

Maybe you should understand what the writer has wrote before you make claims.
person Yami Trixie
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgive my grammar. I was in a rush. Keep up the fic sweetie.
person Yami Trixie
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute idea and everyone seems very IC. I look forward to more.