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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaa, Oh please. Have more courage, it was good. Well, in my opinion. Had me laughing every once in a while. Childish Vaan was pretty humorous. Man, he always picks the wrong weapons, though... v.v;; Anyway, it was alright, but hell of a long wait is right! Eesh. Well, keep up the good work. Oh, oh! More Balthier! So entertaining!
TnT
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is HILARIOUS!!! This chapter was long in coming and you may not think it was worth it, but I do. It was all I could do not to laugh hysterically when my mom called while I was reading the interrogation. Your characterizations are rather good, btw. The short piece Bathier had was right on the money... so very flippant. And poor Vossler. He never gets any breaks. HAHAHAHA! Can't wait to see what Vaan will do in chapter 3. Don't make your adoring fans wait so long this time. XP
Des
Des
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really funny i like it so far keep writing yay!!!!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! I can't wait until the next chapter! I was a little surprised to see the 2nd one up, but hey, I still enjoyed it~ It's so very much in character and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious! you should so continue!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good pacing, really enjoying the suspense. can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay, the next chappie! I was afraid you weren't going to write anymore even though this story is highly amusing. ;~; It was worth the wait; trust me. :D
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally died when Vaan used a plunger as a weapon. I'm not a huge fan of Twincest but Basch and Noah make a good exception don't you think?
anyway I hope to see you update soon. Keep up the good work!
anyway I hope to see you update soon. Keep up the good work!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....I fricken love you. xD And I love your characters. They're hilarious, and I'm sure my roommate thinks I'm quite crazy for laughing hysterically and rolling about on the floor for no apparent reason. <3 Please, add another chapter soon!
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gyaaa! ;p Feel privileged. I created an account just t' review your story.
First things first: Yay for updatin'! ;p I figured it wouldn't take much longer after your response in LJ land.
Secondly, this chapter is needed. It allows the readers to see how the characters react to each other and will most definitely help with character development. I, for one, can't wait to see how they'll evolve as the story progresses.
Keep up up the spiffy work!
First things first: Yay for updatin'! ;p I figured it wouldn't take much longer after your response in LJ land.
Secondly, this chapter is needed. It allows the readers to see how the characters react to each other and will most definitely help with character development. I, for one, can't wait to see how they'll evolve as the story progresses.
Keep up up the spiffy work!