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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear LORD! @.@ My stomach hurts from laughing too much, my face feels like it's been split in half from grinning the rest of the time. Jeez, that was good.
It seemed a little contrived and predictable at times [regarding the events and so forth], but the writing just carried everything so well. Your style screamed all those good-humour words: sarcastic, ironic, funny, etc.
I especially liked how you mentioned how bloody /girly/ Vaan is without really over-emphasizing it. He looks like a chick, heeheehee, kaynext?
Oooh, I *cannot* wait for the next part. Ooooou, what're the twins gonna do to him?
Speaking of which, the part where they were chasing him around the house? I loved how you kept refering to them as twin number one/twin number two. And the bathroom scene? Priceless.
Humour that is humourous! [man has it been a while since I last saw that]
<3~abi
It seemed a little contrived and predictable at times [regarding the events and so forth], but the writing just carried everything so well. Your style screamed all those good-humour words: sarcastic, ironic, funny, etc.
I especially liked how you mentioned how bloody /girly/ Vaan is without really over-emphasizing it. He looks like a chick, heeheehee, kaynext?
Oooh, I *cannot* wait for the next part. Ooooou, what're the twins gonna do to him?
Speaking of which, the part where they were chasing him around the house? I loved how you kept refering to them as twin number one/twin number two. And the bathroom scene? Priceless.
Humour that is humourous! [man has it been a while since I last saw that]
<3~abi
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot so far! damn, vaan just didn't have a chance against basch and noah. can't wait for updates!!!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' it!! =)
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xD! I really liked this. It's original and interesting, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon. :D
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for supplying reviews to the talented author!! This story is really turning out great, and I like the future pairing of BaschxNoahxVaan sounds really hot *drools* but anyway it's great. feel a little sorry for vaan though, hope his ribs don't cause him too much trouble. question if you feel like answering it, is reks going to show up in this story? just curious since the twins keep saying that he looks familiar. keep up the good work ^^