rate_review Reviews

I like it. You've done well, though the distraction did show, somewhat. It's a very good orchestration of a pair that has possibly more than their fair share of rough edges. Please, continue. I look forward to reading it.

I love how you have the characters portrayed in your story, sticking to how they would personally act. And how you made it fit with the plot and the characters. Didn't like the prologue being so short and not giving more detail of the two in their sexual indeavors... XP I can't wait to read the next chapter, you got me hooked! Please hurry soon with the next chapter, and if they do another love making, be detailed and not too short. I don't want to be teased and left to the imagination, I could read Anne Rice's books for that in her erotica and other writers I won't mention... >.> I want to be pleased and so far I am, Great work! Keep it up! PLEASE!

This is adorable. You've kept Balthier's character in such a way that I could almost see this in between cutscenes. ^_-

Wonderful! I can't wait to see how this story continues. There are far too few Balthier/Basch fanfictions. =)

I'm enjoying it so far... write more! Faster! lol.

This is a good start. I do hope you will add more to this. I'm becoming fond of the Basch/Balthier pairing as I've been playing the game.

You tease!
That was way too short!

Hey hey! Great to see some Basch and Bathlier yaoi around here!
But you made a feww spelling mistakes, one with you accidently calling "Basch"...Bash instead!
^^;;

oh pleeease let thier be more in the future i love yaoi especially FF yaoi. you got the two hottest guys in FF12 screwing each other that's HOT! oh and a little romance would spice it up.

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more.

lol, i loved it!!! update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

me&rossi