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March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ha. When I read that Yuna and Rikku wanted each other so much in the beginning I'm already looking forward to their scene. But nothing happened between then except Yuna's finger in Rikku while at Miihen Highway. Damn. I wish you'd write more for them, instead of them doing themselves. (Though I must say the starting with Yuna was good).
Hope you'll come back for this fic. It's good.
Hope you'll come back for this fic. It's good.
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read this and wow I think its the best fic on this site. Hope to see more in the future. Please say this isn't dead.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, just started sniffing around the Final Fantasy section, and what do I find? A great story! Keep it up man, this is excellent stuff.
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's been updated! And with some hot and crazy action in chapter 4 too. Next stop: Moonflow?
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, this story makes me so horny.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A-m-a-z-i-n-g, is all I can say.
I DEMAND MORE.
Seriously.
<33
^^ They're very addicting chapters!
I DEMAND MORE.
Seriously.
<33
^^ They're very addicting chapters!
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I got some good news and some bad news....
The good news is.... I got chapter 4 completed and chapter 5 is half done as we speak.
Now the bad news...
The bad news is.... My laptop is dead so I can't upload chapter 4 (it's on my laptop) Im still trying to get money to get it fixed but atleast I continued the story on paper now so once my laptop is fixed I just need to type it up and post it on here.
Sorry about this people but rest asured! The story will go on!
The good news is.... I got chapter 4 completed and chapter 5 is half done as we speak.
Now the bad news...
The bad news is.... My laptop is dead so I can't upload chapter 4 (it's on my laptop) Im still trying to get money to get it fixed but atleast I continued the story on paper now so once my laptop is fixed I just need to type it up and post it on here.
Sorry about this people but rest asured! The story will go on!
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far. Keep up the great work. As for the vote I'd like to see some action on Besaid Island.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was quite good, but you could see it was rushed, try to spend more time on the next one, even if it means it wont come out verry soon. I think the next one should be in besaid island.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, readers. Sorry I haven't added chapter 3 yet, It's half done at the moment. Can't tell you what's in it, you just gotta wait and find out yourselfs. I would continue the story now but I lost that will to continue on typing at the moment.... and I just got Final Fantasy XII :p
Once I finish Final Fantasy XII, give me a week or 2... or 3, then i'll continue on with the story.
By the way, just so you guys know; chapter 3 will compose of 2 parts. It's kind of a lengthy chapter. More dialog than *ahem* action.
If you want to give me some ideas or anything just post it here or tell me on msn:- wwerulez2005@hotmail.com
Once I finish Final Fantasy XII, give me a week or 2... or 3, then i'll continue on with the story.
By the way, just so you guys know; chapter 3 will compose of 2 parts. It's kind of a lengthy chapter. More dialog than *ahem* action.
If you want to give me some ideas or anything just post it here or tell me on msn:- wwerulez2005@hotmail.com