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for Last Mission: Gullwings Style

by holdenwarrior

person Streti
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was pretty nice! Especially considering FFX-2 isn't one of my favorite games. I liked the second chapter, Payne's in your face attitude fit her better than her easygoing game version. Dunno if you're going to continue, but if you are, I'm wondering about what kind of ideas you had for Mi'ihen highway.
person jsg23
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow your story rock ! Besaid Island please !
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool, it's nice to see im getting some reviews now. I'll start typing up Chapter 3 sometime this month (feb) Im just kinda not in the mood to start it yet. I need that typing motivation lol But don't worry, I got the chapter and the rest of the story all planned out still so just be patient ;)
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I choose them going to Besaid Island. Anyways like the style so far and hoping to see other characters make some appearances. Here's to a great ch.2 and an as great ch.3.
person omaesan
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Miihen. Great story so far. Keep going
person hentaituxedomask
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. love the story, not enough ffx or ffx2 stuff around here. i'm voting B) Mi'ihen High Road
person silent_killer
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i must say. very well done story for a first timer. the well used description of the characters and the environment within the FF world was spot on. the scenes themselves at times were a little over descriptive (but its not always a bad thing) the yuna scene was perfect. i'd be telling lies if i didn't say "oooo yeah" atleast 3 times while reading it. i've given a 4 star rating. keep it up holden and i definatly look forward to part to (which will have paine in it :P)