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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least they got to have a little bit of fun together before being 'Rude-ly' interrupted. (Sorry about the bad pun) Love your description, it's really beautiful. I kinda feel bad for Tifa, because I'm a big fan of TifaXCloud pairings, but I love RenoXCloud too. That's one of my absolute favs. Keep up the amazing work, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the storyline is heading. It's been very interesting so far.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*nods sagely* Yes, yes, Rude like the wrath of god.
I still laugh over that situation. God, i really can't help but wonder if Reno's going to talk his way out of it or if he's gonna get a lecture on professionalism from Tseng (oh to be a fly on the wall for that conversation).
And yes, even on the second run through, the smut was still very, very hot.
I still laugh over that situation. God, i really can't help but wonder if Reno's going to talk his way out of it or if he's gonna get a lecture on professionalism from Tseng (oh to be a fly on the wall for that conversation).
And yes, even on the second run through, the smut was still very, very hot.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT.
I feel sorry for Tifa. *Sniff*. Can't wait to see how the convo turns out...
I love your characterizations in this. Cloud's stoic passion comes out nicely, Reno is his usual affable self. Tifa only had a few lines but it showed the awkward but friendly limbo between Cloud and Tifa. And I love Vincent in this. So calm but a firm support for both Cloud and Tifa.
Well done! More!!!!! 5 stars.
I feel sorry for Tifa. *Sniff*. Can't wait to see how the convo turns out...
I love your characterizations in this. Cloud's stoic passion comes out nicely, Reno is his usual affable self. Tifa only had a few lines but it showed the awkward but friendly limbo between Cloud and Tifa. And I love Vincent in this. So calm but a firm support for both Cloud and Tifa.
Well done! More!!!!! 5 stars.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just wow! Nice and steamy with a plot in there too. I like how Reno loses control around Cloud - makes their interactions seem more real. Can't wait for the next update!
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a friggin' place to leave it! *tosses glass of water on you* JK! I swear Reno just can't help himself when it's Cloud, huh?
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhh, that was a nice read for Sunday morning. Thank you. Is Rude gonna interrupt them next chappie? Damn, I hope not.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(ohmygod, You've totally killed me...*argh* Fucking evil cliff-hanger!)
Well...oddly enough the first thing that comes to mind is, "oh fuck is Rude gonna kick his ass." (lol)
Other than that? Hmm...UST...hot...good... I mean holy crap...ass-kicking Reno+Cloud-molesting Reno=fgsgi;fja;kfja Ahem, and nice touch with Cloud's subtle dirty talk. Hehe.
Well...oddly enough the first thing that comes to mind is, "oh fuck is Rude gonna kick his ass." (lol)
Other than that? Hmm...UST...hot...good... I mean holy crap...ass-kicking Reno+Cloud-molesting Reno=fgsgi;fja;kfja Ahem, and nice touch with Cloud's subtle dirty talk. Hehe.
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this
is
beautiful
really
& that cliffe only killed me a little bit
I had a mild seizure, and my homicidal spree only lasted 8 hours
*runs off to plot Sterling's demise*
UPDATE!!!!
is
beautiful
really
& that cliffe only killed me a little bit
I had a mild seizure, and my homicidal spree only lasted 8 hours
*runs off to plot Sterling's demise*
UPDATE!!!!
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why in the world did you stop there?!
Reno smirked, knowing that not many people could forget him even if they wanted to. Haha. Love it!
5 stars. That was an awful place to stop! I was getting all hot 'n' bothered!!!! Noooes! The writing in this chapter is so incredibly HOT. Gah.
Reno smirked, knowing that not many people could forget him even if they wanted to. Haha. Love it!
5 stars. That was an awful place to stop! I was getting all hot 'n' bothered!!!! Noooes! The writing in this chapter is so incredibly HOT. Gah.
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Badass Turk action! Yes! I loved the Reno and Rude interactions. They very nicely done, and it's nice to see them not reduced to comic relief or lucky fuck-ups. I like your actions scenes. They're very understated yet tense. You eye for the little details is what makes it really wonderful. Damn, you might've just kick-started "Blood and Whiskey"....