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Yummy fluff. I was so happy to see that you updated and this chapter did not disappoint. I loved it. Who was spying from the window I wonder? Keep up with this great fic. I love it when RenoXCloud is written so well.

*chuckles* Knew Reno wouldn't be able wait that much longer before making a move. Hehe. Hmmm...letsee...We have four guesses on the spy. An amused/relieved Rude("Maybe he'll stop fucking talking about him"), a concerned Tseng, a sneaky Elena, or a voyueristic Rufus. My bet's on Rufus, but that's just me (and our recent conversation).

A chapter a week? Yay!

Oh, the plot thickens. Loved Tifa's reaction to Reno's obvious attraction to Cloud, nice and subtle. I always loved the idea of Tifa and Cloud being together, but Reno and Cloud just drives me completely wild. I just love that pairing and you are doing a great job with it, even though there hasn't been any sex yet. I love how you're taking your time with it though, because the build up makes it that much better when the sparks do start to fly. I'm definitely looking forward to your next update. Bravo!

Of course you know parts of this chapter left me chuckling wickedly. Ah yes, already Reno's got that devious mind working. Why do I get the funny feeling that Cloud's not gonna know what hit him once Reno's done feeling out and assessing the situation? XD Anyway, great bloody job.

I finally decided to give this story a shot and I love it so far. It's written very well and I love how you have Cloud reacting to the situation. I'll be looking forward to an update.

OH NO!!!!!! whats gunna happen......Reading on......^.^

Hahahaha a drunk Reno...and a slightly perverted closet pervet Cloud!!!! YES YES YES *humps air* Hahahahahaah I love this story *mauls yoo* MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!

Lions,Tigers, and.......Cloud with his pants down,OH MY!!

*jumps up and down* Wonderful, wonderful so far! I think I love the rapport the most, the comfort growing between them, and all that other great stuff. And of course the little details amused me, like Shinra still having private rooms in clubs and bars. XD You have a stronger will than me...I woulda had Reno make a pass at him by that point. Anyway, I think this is really fantastic so far, though you might want to watch the "zoto"/yo reference every now and again. I find it's best used sparingly and at just the right moments (best for some kind of emphasis, I suppose) or it gets annoying and I personally find that it messes with the flow of the dialogue a little.

oh most definitely keep goin, I love Cloud/Reno, but u also added more den jus them. A nice variation from jus havin the set couples (tho i still go for R/C all da way). Update soon

This story definitely has promise. I'm sorry I hadn't checked it out ealier, put off by the love triangle threat. Anyway, I'm hoping you update soon (no pressure or anything) and I'm eager to see where you take this. I have a high hope that you manage to handle a love triangle properly, you'll just have to forgive me if I'm not too thrilled over the het stuff. Don't ask, it's nothing personal, just not my bag these days.