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for A Lamia's Tail

by ricobanderas9

person Anon
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Been going over your old stuff. Short but one of your hottest. Got me hooked on the idea of lamias!
person animekid
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa crappytastic hotgoodness.....

*shakes head*

still that was so damn original; I actually play FF4 and didn't consider this XD

I love you writing style as well as your innotative input on the FF scene

goodness make more! If you make anything with Shadow from FF6 or FFT (besides the other FFT fic that you made,) I'll literally go back and replay the games.

this is up there with some of my favorites.
person Streti
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. It was interesting, but I agree with the previous notes about Cecil's character, so the "corruption" didn't quite come through. Didn't she make him waste any of his seed on her bountiful breasts?
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool stuff. I'm really into MC. Could you write one about FFTactics? Celia and Lede had a Charm type ability, if I'm not mistaken. Can't remember what it was called though. You could make it work on Ramza or Orlandu at that mission right before they were going to fight Marquis Olmdor.
person ricobanderas9
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^Odd. Any other comments Citan, shoot me an e-mail, my name @gmail.com. This high review count is giving me delusions of popularity.
person Badass Freaking Overlord
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was cool, I love lamias/nagas/liliths/whatever, they're super sexy. I hope you do more fics like this with them! If you need any ideas, I remember there was some mission in FF Tactics Advance that had some lamia queen or something that was causing problems for people in a town...you could have Ritz and/or Shara go to stop her and become entranced, seduced, and enslaved.
person ricobanderas9
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^Thanks for comments, yar. From a literary standpoint I feel that all of this is a bit far-fetched when you look at character profiles. I'm a big Cecil fan myself, but in-game, he can get hit by charm magic too, which is my focus. A non-charm-induction would definitely need to be pretty elaborate. Do you write too, Citan?
person slutty mc slut slut
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow very descriptive never knew thats what happened to a guy(refering to this)
Every time her hands pumped the tip of his penis, the sides sent a shockwave down into the base of his sex and up his spine into his brain.

Preaty dam nice now i know why guys say there head hurts after a hand/blow job.
person Citan
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I do, but I keep the name I write under a secret usually. Sorry.
person ricobanderas9
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ I'm glad it was well received. As noted in my little top-note, this was meant to satisfy a more narrow crowd, so I'm happy if it's enjoyable for others. Actually, I had the Lamia idea before- some posters from the collective wanted to see Lamia stuff, so the other commenter wasn't the first. It's funny though, I think Cecil's goodness makes him a more attractive target for brainwashing. Thanks for your guy's reviews... if there are any pairings you'd like to see and if I have some time I'd be happy to write more.