rate_review Reviews

The trick to picking an attractive target and writing them realistically is not to underestimate his/her abilities. Cecil's devotion makes him an attractive target, but the game shows several times that he's beyond corruption, even when in the midst of darkness. If his own dark job and Golbez/Zemus's attempts can't sway him from his heroic nature, nothing can. You should go for characters who have incredible devotion and purity, but aren't actively shown to be impossible to corrupt--which is why your Lost in Snow is definitely your best, because Tifa is the perfect example of someone who has an immensely strong will and devotion, but nonetheless can stray from it, even if just slightly.

Love it. It's be great if you did more. Maybe about 9 or 10.

Eh, not bad, but it could have been a lot better. Cecil's an unrealistic target, too good and uncorruptible by evil for this fic to seem at all serious. One of the other characters, like Rosa or Rydia or Kain, would've been a lot better. And the request had asked for a lamia seducing an FF woman, anyway. But it's not bad, and it was nice of you to actually do a request fic for some random person. I hope they're properly grateful for it and don't whine about it being a guy instead of a girl.