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for Feel It

by AkitoSouma

person natzilla

schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Excellent story and excellent style :)

person Raiast

schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful. I don't even know how to say it any other way. You captured them perfectly.

person butabara

schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM

oh. my. god. I LOVE IT! It was so perfect! Exactly how I imagine Yazoo would be. Even I can't write him so perfectly. I adore you. ADORE YOU.

person nickkroon

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM

i wont just toss you a bone, i will throw you a whole skeleton, my dear. i really enjoyed feel it.. it is such a lovely tragedy, you are not the only one that feels that yazoo is the one that is the quietest, but is somehow the most fascinating to explore, ( Kadaj is just obsessed and egotistical, loz a brute and a simpleton) as he is so cold on the surface, he just has to be shielding something, and silent waters run deep. and as nice as smut is, you are right. it is nice to make your brain do gymnastics and write stuff that leaves you with food for thought. it gives you a sense of accomplishment, doesnt it?! i hope you will write some more.. c u around on the fanfiction world

person Indigo Eyes

schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM

What?! Something more than random smut on AFF? Astounding.

Really though, this was so amazing. (The random reference to Monty Python didn't hurt.) Long, but so worth it. The concept of there being other clones was so conceivable I'm amazed no one else thought of it. And someone finally justified their fraternal relationship. I'd definitely love to read more for you. Maybe not an add-on to this specific story (as I thought it ended nicely), but definitly more!

person barara

schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM

aww, that was so sad :( but i loved it :D great story! i like your writing style ;)

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