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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was vastly entertaining, I certainly hope that you will continue. I love your Kadaj, he's an absolute princess! I laughed aloud at that bit about Yazoo drawing guns at work and Kadaj thinking he just wanted to shoot Nancy--I honest-to-God laughed aloud at that part! Perfect!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so confused. This story hit me like a train filled with laughing gas O_o
I'm not saying that really in a bad way.. that's just what it felt like.
And hey.. where's the porn? XD
But for the love of all that is good... stay on one train of thought. That first chapter could have been broken into at least three separate chapters. And umm.. Kadaj sounds like a woman. We like our yaoi because it's hot men with hot men, we like the manliness of it. We don't read yaoi for girly sentiment, we watch chick flicks for that. We don't read yaoi for mind-raping, we watch eva for that. We read yaoi for male porn. Keep them male, hun.
I have to say though, I couldn't stop reading it. And the second chapter was good. It's just so horribly confusing, that my mind is going on overdrive trying to figure out what the hell is going on.
I'm not saying that really in a bad way.. that's just what it felt like.
And hey.. where's the porn? XD
But for the love of all that is good... stay on one train of thought. That first chapter could have been broken into at least three separate chapters. And umm.. Kadaj sounds like a woman. We like our yaoi because it's hot men with hot men, we like the manliness of it. We don't read yaoi for girly sentiment, we watch chick flicks for that. We don't read yaoi for mind-raping, we watch eva for that. We read yaoi for male porn. Keep them male, hun.
I have to say though, I couldn't stop reading it. And the second chapter was good. It's just so horribly confusing, that my mind is going on overdrive trying to figure out what the hell is going on.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked this story!
I wish that you'd write more!
I wish that you'd write more!
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!! MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!! WOOT! You're a great author.
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!! WOOT! You're a great author.