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by MandiCottontail

person E.E.M.
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a good plot line here, as far as I know the only other story I've read in this same category was Lioness of Balamb by Hopemia. The "Squall turns into a woman" plot is seldom used and provides a variety of ways to take the story, however to stay true to Final Fantasy 8; Squall would only allow himself to be shell shocked for a short time before regaining his icy composure. At the D-Prison he was still something of a recluse and as such would have bottled his emotions rather than let them show, especially in front of Almasy.

But all in all a good plot to run with, I look forward to reading more of this. As always, keep writing and I'll keep reviewing.
person Lady Kakira
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories ive read plus it features my favorite characters. Keep up the excellent work
person Zannie
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I ve seen this on another site! Its really cool, but Squall shouldn't be out of character just becuse he's a woman. Maybe he should regain his icy composure and get some fighting sprit! HEHEH Fujin. She s so awesome, but pretty please make it a Fujinxfemale/malesquallxseifer. Have you ever read until the full moon? Theres a guy in this who turns into a girl at night, and a guy in the day. Could you possibly do something similar? I want it to turn out to be yaoi, yuri and hetro within the same pairing pretty please! Seriously that would be so cool! Super happy selphiiieee request pretty please I like trains etc? And maybe Squall being humiliated by being made to wear sexy outfits like french maid, kitty ears complete with collar etc.
person corbin
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it.Its..different.Cant wait to see what happens next.