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schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long for me to review. I loved the update, so beautiful. I can never get over how well you write these two. Wonderful. Looking forward to see what Cloud's reaction is to what Tifa has to tell him.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Great build up, and your sex scenes never dissapoint. I like how you went with a more tender love scene this time, a rarity in Cloud/Reno fics. You write it well. Looking forward to seeing how this story pans out, Tifa jealous? That'd be interesting. ^_^
person mushi
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more asap! cant wait to read more!
person Tazzy
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh! This is getting good, and poor Rufus when Cloud finds out 'cause it's gotta happen eventually... I pity him when *both* Cloud and Reno find out......
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're such a tease Iggy! Still wonderful to read.
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see an update. Rufus has snared both of the boys in something that could turn out to be wonderful...or a royal pain in the ass. Wonderful job.
person Sterling
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Cloud closed his eyes as he thought of it, feeling as though he was closing in on something profound. Oh but he wanted to be good with Reno; he wanted to see what that pretty face looked like while caught up in the abandon of ecstasy. Cloud had imagined it too many times to count since their first kiss and was beginning to realize that he didn’t want to just fantasize anymore."

*points up* That is my favorite paragraph in chapter five. Very nice glimpse of the inside of Cloud's mind. I love how they are getting more attached to each other, ever so slowly. And Reno is being so deliciously cryptic at the end there. Feel free to send me the next chap for beta'ing. You know I'm always willing to lend my second set of eyes. --Sterling
person Izzy
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!
person Drowned Wednesday
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow

great story
...damn cliffie

all you authors are the same *glares*

no!, wait come back!!
I DIDNT MEAN IT!!!

keep updating <3

person Sterling
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Favorite line from chapter four: "Get off the phone or I’ll show you just how harmless I am." *chuckles* Wishing you lots of good luck and positive energy as you work toward getting your next few installments finished. --Sterling