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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Cloud refuses to be just a conquest, Reno is under orders from Rufus, Reno gets all serious when asking about Cloud's relationship with Tifa. Could it be that Reno wants something real with Cloud? Awaiting the answers.....
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, so fluffy and sweet. You're so great at prolonging the sweet tension. I love it and this fic.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmm, cloud and reno goodness! i love this story, and can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Things are getting ... snuggly. Great job.
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very lovely. I love how he gets under Cloud's skin. That's so Reno. Loved the sweet kiss, is there going to be more in the next chapter. Don't get me wrong, I love build-up, makes the fic better. I say this every time, but you write these two in perfect character. Keep it up.
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always knew Rufus was a bit of a prick. I wonder if Reno and Cloud will get him for this ... or thank him?
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'm so glad you're continuing this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hummm - first steps are always hard aren't they?
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Favorite line: "Not to mention he’s always leering at me like he’s trying to figure out what flavour I come in [...]" Great job so far, Iggy. It's a wonder you get anything other than Reno's dialog written sometimes, what with all that mouth-running he does. ^_^ --Sterling
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
constructive criticism coming your way.
your Cloud is very OOC.
I’ve read a few fics from you and I find you make Cloud way to bashful. Blushing around Reno? He really doesn’t like this man much and he would probably keep a tough image around him due to that fact. I think Cloud if he wants really could take control of any situation and handle things in a calm natural way.
Sorry, I don’t usually do this, but I just can’t stand him. Tough Cloud up abit and you'll be fine because Reno's great.
your Cloud is very OOC.
I’ve read a few fics from you and I find you make Cloud way to bashful. Blushing around Reno? He really doesn’t like this man much and he would probably keep a tough image around him due to that fact. I think Cloud if he wants really could take control of any situation and handle things in a calm natural way.
Sorry, I don’t usually do this, but I just can’t stand him. Tough Cloud up abit and you'll be fine because Reno's great.