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for Broken and Bonded Refrain

by Crya2Evans

schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My Gosh, that must have had you steeped in depression for a month! What an amazing piece! I'm a writer myself, and i know that the words effect the writer much more than the reader. I can only imagine what Cloud's character has done to you, lol. Amazing job, really.
person Ri
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely and with one of my fav song lyrics in it it was so much loverier...*is that a word? XD) So sweet, i mean Rude and Shera is a new thing for me but my gosh they make a real sweet couple, a shame it never happened. Boo oh well! Loved it!! As always ^^
person Ri
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Came back after reading the next chapter and that was so good! The near last part had me all sad!!! Gosh i really love your stories.
person Cloris Forever
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Cloud and Aeris are so beautifully tragic. It's why I love them xD But there are never enough of them anywhere and not enough writers with good writing style to portray them in! Could you possibly, maybe think about writing a oneshot/fic for the pairing? pretty please *puppy eyes*
person Ri
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg i loved the CloudxAerith story. *Wipes eyes* I mean gosh it had feeling in it i mean not like any of your otehr stories, loved it. Now i must read the other chapter. Tseng/Sephiroth! *giggles and goes off to read it* I shall come back with another review. =p
person Ri
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved Elena's part, i mean now i know so much that makesher seem more then some nobody character,love it, she is a tough girl yet at the same time she has the girly things that alot of girls show off.Love it! XD She rocks.

Loved the Reno and Reeve part as well! Woot loved how there thoughts were the same yet were not, you getme? Cause i have no idea how to put it into words. =p But ilove it! Loved the last part when Reno said he WILL make it! Woot shows the man's dedication and uh well he shows that nothing will bring him down from reaching his goal ya? Loveit! Your stories never make me stop loving them. ^_^
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww man there you go /again/. Good thing I've got kleenex on my desk.

I really like Elena's chapter. She's such a trip. I'm so glad you didn't turn her into a 'true' blonde. The song didn't seem right at first (it's one of the few I /do/ have), but it does make an odd sort of sense. Will we ever get to 'meet' her mom? I remember her sister being mentioned, I think - damn my faulty memory.

And much love to Reno and Reeve, of course. I can't wait until you get more into Boundaries. While it's not exactly one of my favorite pairings, I like the way they are in Shattered. A very 'aww'-inducing couple, which is odd, considering it's, you know, Reno. I think you may be the closest I've seen to him being portrayed as the sentimental lovey type. (For some reason, I can still see the image of him in Junon, getting his weapons ready and preparing to crawl through the ducts. I don't know why, but it's one that just completely stuck with me.)

I know what you mean about eclectic tastes. I've got just about everything except rap, hip-hop, pop, and country - can't stand those one bit, for some reason. They make my brain twitch. But I'll dig these up eventually. I keep meaning to, but put it off.

And you're welcome for the correction. I'm glad I could do something other than say 'Great story! =D'

Even though it is. So there.

~SneakyOne
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! More Refrain! Happy happy happy n.n

Though you should know you have a chronological oopsie in there -

>>When he was seventeen, Zack met the man who would become his mentor, Angeal.

And then just below --

>>At the age of sixteen, two months after meeting Angeal, Zack found himself acquainted with General Sephiroth.

Time traveler? xD

I'm eventually going to have to hunt down all these songs for myself - I haven't heard half of them, but the lyrics seem like good choices so far. =x

~SneakyOne

person Ri
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am always slow! So i read the three and Vincent and Cid's parts made me sniffly! I mean so much emotion especially for Cid i dunno why but i love how you write him! I mean you portray him as this tough guy but yet sensitive and his life! Okay i just enjoyed all of the chapters i caught upwith. Each one good as the other! Loved it! Great as always! ^_^
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Stop making me all sniffly!

I can't say enough how much I enjoy reading your work. These 'collections' are a great change of pace - something different in each chapter, just a peek into the inner workings behind the major story. I'll be waiting for the next one!

~SneakyOne