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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow just wow! this is a twist I have yet to read! and I like it! It's fantastic and your writing style really draws a person into the story line! I can't wait for the next update!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Irvine and Squall mentally talking to themselves provides a laugh for me. Please write more. :D
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeowch, this spells trouble for Irvine. Although Irvine and Vincent together = yum, since they're arguably the two prettiest boys from the final fantasy series. You've made Vincent really quite scary...he's not much like that in the game (or not intentionally at least, the poor dear) but it works well for the plotline, I suppose. But in yaoiland, 'payment' only means one thing...
Thanks for emailing me! I appreciate it, since I might've missed the update otherwise. Let me know when a new chapter comes up!
Thanks for emailing me! I appreciate it, since I might've missed the update otherwise. Let me know when a new chapter comes up!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please let there be more.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww so cute, i love cute little Irvine. but why he grew up so fast!
i'm waiting to see more of their relationship acutally develop into a romantic one.
man, i can imagine the angst when Irvine stage the scene for Squall to discover.
but why is Vincent bad guy? noooooooooo! i love Vincent.
can't he just be a dark, quiet, manly seme?
yeah can u see me droolin just at the mention of him being together w/ Kadaj n others....
dun get me started on 3Ps....... *drool*
ok i'll stop the drooling. lookin forward to the ch5~!!
i'm waiting to see more of their relationship acutally develop into a romantic one.
man, i can imagine the angst when Irvine stage the scene for Squall to discover.
but why is Vincent bad guy? noooooooooo! i love Vincent.
can't he just be a dark, quiet, manly seme?
yeah can u see me droolin just at the mention of him being together w/ Kadaj n others....
dun get me started on 3Ps....... *drool*
ok i'll stop the drooling. lookin forward to the ch5~!!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! So...damn...good! I wanna know what happens! If you would be so kind, could you possibly email me when you update? I know it's a bit much to ask, but it'll allow me to keep up with the story, which means I can keep reviewing! The idea is very original, the characters beautifully described - and I quite like how you've introduced characters from other final fantasy games as well. Hope you update soon!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.> ...Gingerbreadmen..? o O
...And I know what I said the first time around... And I still mean it. I just have neglected to notice that you even updated until I saw this earlier... >.> ..And I still ove this as much as I did before. *smiles softly* .. Especially since you mentioned Vincent. ><' I guess I can't help I am hopelessly addicted to Vincent... adore Irvine.... and well.. Squall is pretty awesome too.. ..... But you know...
...And I know what I said the first time around... And I still mean it. I just have neglected to notice that you even updated until I saw this earlier... >.> ..And I still ove this as much as I did before. *smiles softly* .. Especially since you mentioned Vincent. ><' I guess I can't help I am hopelessly addicted to Vincent... adore Irvine.... and well.. Squall is pretty awesome too.. ..... But you know...
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-_- It cut me off. You know, I really am starting to hate these review boxes. xD ...
But I went on to babble about adoring Irvine and thinking that Squall wasn't so bad himself. Anything else.. I have no idea anymore. Oh.. And "ove" was supposed to be "love" ......
And with my rambling done for the time being.... I'll give you some peace. ..And quiet....
Ra
But I went on to babble about adoring Irvine and thinking that Squall wasn't so bad himself. Anything else.. I have no idea anymore. Oh.. And "ove" was supposed to be "love" ......
And with my rambling done for the time being.... I'll give you some peace. ..And quiet....
Ra
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. While Seifer/Squall will always be my favorite pairing, you won me over with cute little Irvine and Squall as the reluctant guardian.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's adorible so far... i'd really like to read more