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This was lovely! You have a great way of phrasing things I could almost hear the rain and the fire as I was reading it. ^_^ Squall and Seifer felt so real in how they acted, and their feelings towards each other, even the nightmares are totally plausible after everything they'd been through. Though, I did NOT expect Squall to come right out and ask Seifer to sleep with him. XD I do hope they work out their individual issues, because they are so damn cute together and deserve to be happy. Are you going to do more on this, or is it just a one shot? It's great as it is, don't get me wrong. The ending lines (from Seifer's saying he loves Squall but waits to tell him) are fantastic. But if you ever do decide to do more with this, I'm sure it'll rock, too. ^_^ Great job!

That was really nice. Just a nicely written story that makes you feel good.