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for Black Magic Woman (REVISED)

by jimmy

schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Five stars just isn't enough for this! Epic!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey wierdmeijin, are you going to do any more stories or updates? your stories are really great, and it's really hard to find anything like this, so please update! thanks!
person Hyboria
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi I really enjoyed this story, I haven't read the original, but seeing as this is a revised version, I don't see why I should bother.

Though i must say I agree with the above poster, you should really write a new story or update one of your older ones (Haven't read them yet). Also weird would you mind adding an e-mail address to your profile, so readers can mail you.

I really enjoyed reading this story as I am a huge FF (My favorite being Tifa or Aeris). Anyways keep up the good work. I am off to read some of your other stories.

Also regarding your e-mail address could you mail me on palmbi@hotmail.co.uk so i can safe yours? Pretty please ^^

schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, so very hot. please, write new fanfics, or update old ones, please? i absolutly love your fics, they're all amazingly sexy, so please update! thanks!
person Dopo
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic fic, I really like what you have done with this story. It's very detailed, and somewhat long although it is a quality read from start to finish. Of course it helps that Lulu is my favourite FF girl.

On another note I have ben trying to get in touch with you for a while now wierdmeijin. It's regarding the Final Fantasy story "Education" that you have written back in late 2005. If you could add a e-mail address to you profile I would be grateful, I have some suggestions and Ideas on the story, if you are willing to continue, if not I would have anothe proposal for you.

I'll be checking back to see if you have gotten my message.

If you like you could drop me a quick mail with your e-mail address. My address is achdudreck@hotmail.com

Hope to hear from you soon, again congratz to BMW.
person Brathian
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ummm well don't really know what to say to that one. The bondage was good and the humiliation worked but apart from that if it is a revision i would hate to see the original. The grammar isn't the best without respective paragraphing and there is no way sticking something up someones vagina will stop them peeing. Women do not pee out of there vagina's there not male they have two separate holes.

After struggling through it and getting very confused as to who was saying what, The thoughts were fine,it wasn't a bad fic in fact the concept behind it was rather brilliant.