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by TheSky

schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The changes seem rushed/unfinished. But the ideas are great... you should put more time into it and you'll have a masterpiece.
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SKKKYYYYY. Where the heck are you?!?!? This is one of the greatest fics. Possibly my favorite ever, although I'm still waiting for you to get back to finish up our trade.

But every time I read what you have so far, it's amazing. AMAZING and Awesome!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I requested it ^_^.

I absolutely loved this. One of my favorites of all time, likewise... I love your description of smoking, their reactions, the constant kisses, and the loving caresses. Looking forward to phase two!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I simply loved this. I mean, I loved ricobanderas's Barb-E Doll fic, and some parts involving her SEEMED kind of lifted from there, I like the inclusion of Silk. Hoping to see more of her in the future- as a suggestion though, you might wanna utilize the 'silk' a bit more. Think of other ways to use it. ;) Here's to waiting for your next fic! Ciaos!