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It was sad, but good, as is all your writings. It's amazing how you can make the reader hate Seifer, make him the most unbelievable asshole at one point and then totally fall in love with him and feel so completely sorry for him. =/

its nice to not see Irvine portrayed as a possessive, angry, prick like you have him in Defining Love. Don't get me wrong its a fine story I just think Irvine is a mess and it seems intentional maybe that's just me, I know about plot and all that but this would be good longer. I've never been happy with one shots, I always want more especially when the pairing is Squall and Irvine they're the best. So thanks for that. Sigh I wish I could write as well as you do but I always get stuck somewhere.

this is good, you should write a sequal or continue it with the story on how seifer tries to take back squall and what irvine does about it. that would be interesting. good luck!

I nearly cried :( poor Seify.
I don't like the cowboy that much, poor Seify :(
Good story though, thoroughly enjoyed the threesome

I clicked the link for this story expecting to read a complete PWP, but I am pleasantly surprised it's not. I feel bad for Seifer - there was this sense of finality, of a man who knew every facet of his faults had given up (despite being everyone's favourite bastard on the outside). I enjoyed reading this, as well as your other stuff :)

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...Gah. I'm feeling emotions over here. What are you doing to me? (Apparently, I can't handle Seifer leaving?)

This fic is so terribly sad, but I don't think it could have worked any other way. It's beautifully tragic... I feel sadder for Irvine, because he can never replace Seifer in Squall's heart. However, I'm glad, because I feel by Seifer leaving he's liberated both himself and Squall. They can have everything they've ever wanted, except each other. My mind is horribly conflicted, but that's what a good story does. It challenges the reader to put the pieces together themselves and figure out their own feelings.

I adore SeiferXSquall far more than IrvineXSquall, but I think you shouldn't do a sequel and leave it just as is. It's perfect. Fantastic job.

Oh my god. My heart is pounding and my entire body is shaking. I'm completely in tears and have been since Seifer confested that he loves Squall to Irvine. This is hands down the most beautiful fan fiction I have ever read. I'm not joking about anything. Seifer was so in love with Squall that he was willing to give him up for the boy's happiness even if it broke his heart in the process. I believe that is the true definition of love. This is the most beautifuly writen fan fiction out there. If I wrote half as well as you, I'd truly be an amazing writer. Thank you so much for writing this and posting this. It really made my heart melt.

I don't think I'll ever stop crying (and that's a good thing)
Cute but Psycho.

P.S. I don't think I've ever cried this much in my life.

So beautifully written! However... T.T Want. Seifer. Back.

I don't really care it it's a threesome (because you make threesomes hot), but want Seifer back with Squall.

WHAT? ok god but UMMMM wait it just doesn't seem right.... I am just like Not Uh at the end... like wait that's now how stories with those two are sapose to end I want squall still running after seifer! but was good, but still just UHhh..