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March 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha This was very good at the end, oh Fran Fran so snarky. Hello there! I really liked the fact that you wrote some Balthier and Vaan. One of my favourite pairings. It's a shame that I really do not like Balthier Fran I don't know it's not right in my vision but hey I did like this snarky Fran very funny. Thanks for writing this entertaining one shot.
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this storty its superdeduper sexy! I mean I like Balthier and Basch more but Balthier and Vaan is hot too great story xDD
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not really into this pairing, but this story is much better than it's sequel. It seems to flow better and is more believable. Great job.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I absolutely adore these three characters and you hit them bang on. I really felt like it was a part of the game . . . it should have been . . . heh.
Anyway, here's hoping for another part -- threesome maybe? *hint wink nudge*
Anyway, here's hoping for another part -- threesome maybe? *hint wink nudge*
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yum!
me like!
i had an idea like this, but i couldn't do it right... ah, well, you did it a million times better, so i'm happy!
me like!
i had an idea like this, but i couldn't do it right... ah, well, you did it a million times better, so i'm happy!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this! Balthier x Vaan is my fav Great work and you were dead on with the characterization. I would really like to see you write another part.
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY!
Gaaaah, I was wondering when someone would do justice to that scene while they're in the dungeon^_~
Somehow, what you've written now makes more sense the what happened afterwards in the game!
Gaaaah, I was wondering when someone would do justice to that scene while they're in the dungeon^_~
Somehow, what you've written now makes more sense the what happened afterwards in the game!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I can see this happening - I really can. From what I've played of this game it seems that this was just about the only reason Vaan was put into the story... I could be wrong though. You did a wonderful job.