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for Cloud in Wonderland

by Lenore

schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty decent cross-over fic you have here. I think Tidus is a mite out of character, being a bit more of an ass than he was in the game, b ut other than that, the characters seem to match up with the source material.

I'd like to see some more chapters of this.
person john
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this fic is awesome so far, loved how Cloud taught Yuna to use materia, is it ever gonna get updated again?
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I like this story, I didn't think I would. You have me hooked so keep this story going. To tell the truth, from what I've played of FFX I haven't liked Tidus much, either, I do like Cloud, though, he's a much better hero, and his hair is more gravity defying than Tidus' :)
person teamplayer
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a new take on things but overall its a good story.