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by shinimegami23

person Lore
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really great, and lovely and sad, I even cried a little.
I hope to read more from you soon.
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was excellent! You're a very talented writer, you had a really good plot which served as an excellent basis for Auron's emotion of feeling unappreciated or unimportant. And you conveyed his thoughts very well, description was vivid and clear and the romance was phenomenal. Fantastic job and keep writing!