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I enjoyed this sooo much! Being a Cloud/Yazoo fan this was a real gem for me. Especially that despite Cloud was supposed to like Kadaj more, the part with Yazoo became longer and more passionate. This pairing crawls beneath one's skin, they have a great chemistry, no seme/uke cliché, but they swap roles and enjoy each other in every possible way. Great job, loved it!

I see many people read this one, but no one has left a review. I must say...it was really delicious!!1 LOL! I juts loved the concept of pulling them into a time and space where we live and positioning the characters into situations we can all identify ourselves with. It was a great move and I really enjoyed it. You say you are not good with grammar, but you are still good with words and the story is great. I really liked the way you portrayed Sephiroth as the boss and the rest as workers and the fact that they were working on FF7; whilst Seph was wokring on Cloud. hehehe Oh heck, who wouldn't want to have a boss like Seph. Write more and clock in!!!!