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for A Bond of Brothers

by Shadowgirl1

person Rina76
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That pool does strange but wonderful things to people! Love how close they all are in this fic. That's how I imagine them to be.
Beautiful work.
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice. really sweet and tender. it is a nice change from some of the all out sex adventures that i also enjoy immensely, but a bit of sweet balances the bitter...
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm the first to review!! I'm the first to review!! :)))) I like it. I think you've got a good start here. I hope you continue. What I see is a love triangle, kind of. Yazoo loves Kadaj and Loz loves Yazoo. Kadaj doesn't love anyone, except maybe mother and Seph. I see Loz being broken-hearted a lot of the time, wistfully watching Yazoo cuddle with Kaddishi. Just a few thoughts. Anyway -- keep going!!!