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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me first say that this story is written... beautifully. You capture the emotions/thoughts that must have gone through Yazoo's mind just perfectly. I also really enjoyed the way you wrote the history of the three. It made me feel like you knew for sure that that was the way everything went down, which is a very important aspect of writing on subjects such as that.
You are doing excellently, and I hope to continue reading this very very soon.
You are doing excellently, and I hope to continue reading this very very soon.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how many chapters are u planning to do for this Redeemer.I would like to see yazoo get his revenge
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i remember reading this story last year when i was crazy about the silver hair brothers. I think Redeemer is the best FF fanfic i have ever read.I do have a question to ask,can yazoo love that girl?Can he even love anything?
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you think Yazoo stare at Kadaj's butt?lol..i thought he was posing like a model.
anyway,hey this is amazing. Its hard to find Yazoo as the main charachter in such a good story like this.Keep update
anyway,hey this is amazing. Its hard to find Yazoo as the main charachter in such a good story like this.Keep update
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! (Gasp)I CANT BELIEVE IT! FINALY I CAN READ CHAPTER 5! WHAT TOOK U SO DAMN LONG?? U HAVE NO IDEA HOW BAD I WANTED TO READ THIS.
BUT WAIT DID U SAID 6 MONTH??ONLY?? I THOUGHT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR YEARS.WATEVER,I'M GLAD U GOT BACK ON WRITING,
,PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
(I'LL BE SO HAPPY IF U CAN POST THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHIN APRIL)
BUT WAIT DID U SAID 6 MONTH??ONLY?? I THOUGHT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR YEARS.WATEVER,I'M GLAD U GOT BACK ON WRITING,
,PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
(I'LL BE SO HAPPY IF U CAN POST THE NEXT CHAPTER WITHIN APRIL)
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can u describe more about the sex,this is AFF if u havent noticed
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! This is getting good.
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story,i like yazoo..he still remained the same like in the movie,but he has some feelings//please write more! gosh,i'd love to read about him starting a family and destroy the world..lol anyway,why everyone hated the purple hair girl??
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i like this! it just yanked me right in! i hope there's more!
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story.I love the thoughts being played out in his head, it makes for interesting content. I look forward to learning about his relationship with the girl as well. please continue ^_^