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for In Your Eyes I Saw Hell

by ShiniMacCloud

person monroeyoder
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update this soon. It's going so well :]
person Orlith
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest of it!?!? this is awsome i would not have guessed that the bad guy be cloud too many people love him. but i agree with everything you have said about him and tifa and their problems. you are awsome please write more O.O
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue, please! So good! I loved this line:
“What’s wrong with Vincent?”

Amazement shot through him as his head snapped towards her.

“What isn’t wrong with him? He’s a walking disaster. A living symbol of how ShinRa fucked the world.”

“What exactly does that make you?”

“Low blow, Tifa.”


xD PLEASE write more!
person Drago
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vincent. Well, better yet, poor Cloud when Vincent gets pissed.
person butabara
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's probably been forever since you updated, i forgot to check, BUT I NEED MORE! This kicks ass. It's...how should I put this...BITCHIN'. I LOVE this one. LOVE it.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good idea i like it, i have read lots of fan fics witht ifa and vincient i now personally think that they go very well together. keep on going with this it's very well done.
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice so far. I do hope you'll continue this soon. =)
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've included Reno, lol. Definitely my favorite form of comic relief. :) I'll have a far more coherent review for you when it's not midnight and I haven't been up for two days. So far, great story and I'm very much looking forward to more. I luuuuurve VinTi :)

RDD
person butabara
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like this. it's got that instant . . .hook . . . thingy. the one i wish I had. good work! hope to see another chapter soon!
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I will keep an eye on ya. This so far is quite interesting.