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for What Will You Do?

by speedofsound

schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Review? Okay.

THAT WAS FUCKING ORGASMIC.

[Ahem]

Really, really fucking hot. I officially ship it. I ship it hard.
<3Thank you for writing this.<3 Fanart will come your way, hopefully soon.
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. If you want a beta, I'm available. Just let me know.
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story from the beginning. I thought it was FREAKIN' GREAT!!! Finally some Balthier/Larsa action.... VERY HOT!!! Keep writing, you have a talent that should not be wasted.
person Sekre
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Quite a turn of events.
person YACUMO
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!!!! You must do another chapter of this story!!!! oh my god I loved every second of the last chapter..... I really hope we can have some yummyness between our lovely uke and his seme.
person cjmixers
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg....That was sooo.....awesome yet sad....poor balthier...I hope vayne ^@^)*($ and then he ^%&$*#@*'s while hes #^$%@&*(@@ himself in the &#^*$^# shower....

Very well written! please keep it going!
person barrsa
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Maybe under the circumstances it's sick to say this, but I think it was hot. It was much longer than your other chapters! Which I think is a good thing. I can't wait to read more!! :D
person Sekre
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're doing good. Wish the chapters were longer, but you update pretty fast.
person Sekre
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! Hope you update it soon. :3