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by darksquall

schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! You never cease to amaze me! I've been reading your stories for years and have never been disappointed once! You are a true writer. You can set and hold a mood, and your dialogue is always so clever it makes me giggle! I'm so happy a writer like you is a Seifer/Squall fan so I can reap the benefits of your skills!! Keep writing please!
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so beautifully written, I think you really pulled it off that Seifer is the submissive one, it didn't ruin anything at all!
I'd really like to see more good writers like you who really can capture the personalites of those two would write for this fandom.
Thanks!
person Axehole
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yarrrr..... i really liked this one, but i have to say that i couldn't but laugh when it was about Squall penetrating Seifer... it kinda ruind my mood....but i quess its just me not preferring Seify as uke. Or attleast i don't beleive it possible, him surrendering like that, not the very first time^^'
But i liked the chatting room parts, and anyway you have a good style at writeing
person Axehole
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and it seems like i'm not the only one who missed the "sq/sei".... heheh
person gia
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*GAWP* OMG, Squall/Seifer fic, as IN SQUALL ON TOP! OMG FINALLY! YESYESYES! Seriously, I have been craving for this for years! Thank you, thank you!
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nyaa! *Jumps up and down and goes awww!!*
Great story! really sweet! I can almost imagine it happening!
Now that would have made the game alot more interseting... :P
Nice work, good job! :D
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi.

That was perfect.

I love you.
person AlbelTheTwisted
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hum...well...nothing against your work...I just don't like Seifer bottoming. I was going to say "Why didn't you warn meee??", but then I went back and realized that it read "Sq/Sei" rather than "Sei/Sq". Silly me didn't read the hints! *hits self* Ah well. Good...rest of the story, in any case.
person gir4me
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Read it 3 or 4 times, and squee happily to myself every single time. I think my favorite part just might be the two of them bellowing at each other on the street after Squall stomps out of the restaurant. Thanks!
person gir4me
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, and now that I read the other reviews, just to give a different POV, I *did* like Seifer bottoming. It didn't seem certain that it would *always* be that way in the future, but appeared to be just the right thing to convince Squall of how much Seifer had changed...and that was essential for them to have any chance together!