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for Blonde Ambition

by sephcounttheways

person Sildil
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another BRILLIANT chapter, one of the best so far!
person Black Ice
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Really, really love you. :glomps: Reno and Rude! :squees:

That aside I really liked this chapter. You did a good job describing the nerves of the young cadets. Like Reno's manic energy or the giggling afterwords.

Speaking of Reno: :smacks him in the head for being an idiot: Cloud's mother's probably gonna kill him too. Though I agree with him on the long johns: terrible piece of clothing. XP

Can't wait for the next chappie! :D
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The image of Cloud in a military barrette is fucking adoreable. Awesome chapter.
person TG
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore your story. and gackt is HOT!
person Elenna
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would have long ago review for this storie's sheer amazingness. It is by far my favorite fic and one of the best I've ever read. I hope it doens't end anytime soon. I squee whenever I see that a new chapter has been posted!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
♥ Wonderful as always! Can't wait to see what happens next. ;D
person Katonie
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO! Cloud didn't cheat! It's not possible! He just needs to explain the situation to Seph and it'll be all better! HE DIDN'T CHEAT!!!!!!!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person Chelsie
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I completely and totally love your story. It is so hard to find a good Sephiroth/Cloud story with a plot and not just smut. I hope you update soon cuz I'm looking forward to how it ends and how Vincent comes back into the story. Can't wait!

Chelsie

P.S. I've been following since Chapter 5 but just figured out how to make this review thing work on here. I would have sent more reviews otherwise.^_^;; Sorry.
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At last. I've been waiting with bated breath for the next installment of BA. I always check back here when I'm online to see if there's an update, and I squeee like a rabid fangrrrl whenever I see another chapter go up!! (My boyfriend thinks I'm crazy, and is suspicious as hell of my love for this story, and fanfiction in general) I think it has something to do with all the penises involved, and the fact that none of them are his. :) I dunno.

But this chapter was lovely, and I really appreciate the fact that you can crank out that many words and edit them so it reads like a book. That's alot of work to go through!! I can really tell that you have put your heart into this story, and I don't want it to end. But I'm your friend on Y!Gallery and on Deviant Art, so at least I have some purty arts to whet the appetite between updates. :3

I liked that fact that Cloud and Seph are getting to that comfortable stage, where they're so in love, but still disagree, but it always smooths out again. Is Seph going to get hurt in Wutai? I hope not, but ya gotta have some sort of conflict and chaos in a story, but I dun wannit to happennnn!!! I wonder if there will be any Turk action over there in the warzone? I'm a monstrous Reno fan, and we have the same hair minus the spikes. Mine's just loooong and red. So Reno's my cosplay character, always. But the story's going great, and I CANNOT wait to read the next chappie!!! And can I just say.... PHONE SAX!! That was... uh... ya know...

Hot.

*slips your muse 20 bucks*
person CyNeko
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god that last line cracked me up. I am SO glad to see an update on this...ashamedly I check like every few days to see if you've updated, I love this fic that much. This chapter was definitely worth the wait, that phone sex was amazing!

As for the Genesis and Rufus fic...my money is on a Tale of Two Bitches...best title ever.