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"Cupcake Factory"? ^_^ omfg, that was fucking hilarious. I was waiting and waiting for you to update and thank god you did. I honestly couldn't wait to see what Cloud and Seph would do about Seph leaving. That moment holds the number one spot in my heart right now. You are one of my FAVORITE authors. No fucking joke. Please Keep Writing. You're so good at it that I envy you.

Are you kidding me? Yes plz over 19,000 words! ILU
Lol "The Tale of Two Bitches" XD

This chapter cracked me up on many occasions :D Loved the way you pictured Genesis! Yum!
Now, phone secks is synonymous with wow to me, thank you.

*heart*
ILUILUILU

AH!!! Seeing this story updated made my day!
Ok so...how do I get that second DVD Sephiroth and Cloud were watching? XD
Also..."cupcake factory"? Is it wrong that was my favorite part?
I loved the fact that eventhough there was sadness in the separation you still kept the interaction between them playful and romantic.
Excellent chapter, each one just keeps getting better!

Nyx

Have I really never reviewed this thing before? Jeeze, I'm such a lazy twat. Anyhow, I just reread the fic, since it's been so long since chapter one and I was having trouble remembering a few things. I think you've got some real talent here, everything fits in seamlessly here; even the OCs, which tend to stand out a little in fanfics. I've really enjoyed reading this. ^-^ I think one of my favorite parts is the beginning of chapter 8 with Seph and Zack. There's something so amusing about Panicked!Seph and Unhelpful!Zack.

Oh, and you know the song in Seph's head at the beginning of chapter 9? I didn't know it when I first read it, way back when, but it's actually become a favorite of mine. It suits him (in canon) doesn't it?

Lottsa Love,
Black Ice

P.S. go with 'A Tail of Two Bitches'

P.P.S. if you can, do you think you could add a dash of Rude/Reno? I love that pairing and I'd love to see you wright them. ^-^

Ack! I spelled 'write' wrong! Where is my brain? :goes off to look for it:

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Oh darling....never ever worry about chapters being to long....if they weren't I'd be a little upset. *grins* I love reading each and every word and since I never want it to end, the longer the better. This was absolutely amazing. I honestly can't remember ever reading a story, EVER, that has me literally laughing, giggling, tearing up, squealing, grinning, aww-ing, or anything the way this story does. It's so awesome I don't even have the right words to say so and thats the truth. You deserve more credit and more reviews. The witty banter, the cute remarks, the cursing, all of it is fitting for the story and it makes both the iconic characters seem real and honey, if there ever was a script to write and create a movie bases off Final Fantasy, I give all the money I had just to see this one made into real life. The best thing is that you actually illustrate some of your chapters, and that happens to be the best thing ever. Gods, if I could draw and illustrate what I write, that would be so awesome, so I praise you on your wonderful effort. This was a well written chapter and even though my heart sank dramatically at the heartfelt loneliness, you did end it pleasantly. And just cause I have to ask, well two things. What do you mean by BA 2, (I would love to see a Genesis/Rufus, fic by you by the way) and is Skylar gonna make a move on Cloud now that Sephy is gone? It makes me think??

Beautiful chapter and thanks so much for updating. I love losing sleep over reading this *grins* It's the best thing ever!

-Lys

Never, never, never worry about chapters being too long, the longer the better, as far as I and I'm damn sure many others, are concerned!

I have a confession to make...I stalk this story. Around the time I start hoping for a new chapter, my standard morning procedure is check email, check Live Journal, check to see if there's an update to BA. Every day. When the update appears, it's like a mini Christmas *grin*

I love so much about this story, but to pick out a few things about this particular chapter, I really like the subtle changes Cloud is going through. His physique, the way he copes after the intial heartbreak is done when Seph leaves. He's gutsy and real and on the way to becoming all he dreams of.

The club was all kinds of wonderful, just perfect, but I have to say my favourite part was Seph just picking Cloud up and his, "That's mine" atttitude. I have to confess to a squeak at that point.

And also, hot, hot, HOT. The sex is a seamless part of the story, yet it never fails to stir me up and the phone sex about blew my mind.

So, in short, fanfreakin'tastic chapter, as always! You pack so much in, so much emotion, characterization and just wall to wall storytelling. It makes me all kinds of happy to know there'll be a BA2, I could read this story for as long as you feel like telling it. I think you once said you want the FF boys to have some happiness and they get it in this for certain. Long may it continue!!

Thanks for writing this and for sharing it!

Your story makes my heart happy. That's all.

I'd leave a more intelligent review (and, truth be told, I will later), but my brain is kinda mush right now (OMFGPHONESEXWHUT), so I'm unable to do that, lol.

I'm going to go back and re-read this about fifty times, then maybe it'll work out, lol. :D

Oohhhh My Gooodddd, that was such an amazing chapter! Thank you! I feel sorry for both of them though. Poor things have to be away from each other for so long...But they'll make it through*sniffsniff* I think I may just cry*sniffsniff*

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie