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-_- Ok, I give up on trying to give you semi-long review. It hates me I swear!!! *cries* I still lurved this chapter and the whole Aerith bit her bottled lip thing cracked me up. Was that a missed typo? I've been trying to tell you that, "“I wasn’t angry, I was hungry. Their drama was standing in the way of dinner,” He was still piling an alarming amount of food onto his plate." is fucking epic. EPIC I say!!! *shakes fish* Anyways, here is a complete review for you...I hope. Keep up the goood wooorrrrkkk!!! x3

YAY I was so excited to finally see a new chapter of this up! I love this story! I honestly can't get enough of it...you write the characters so well.

Cloud so kicked ass in this chapter! I love how he handled the situation in the beginning and was there for Seph throughout. I also love how Seph's thoughts were on Cloud throughout. Its like see he may not be able to say it, those words, but he does show it. I can't wait to see what the three Turk stalkers have in mind for Seph and Vince. This was great, thanks for such a nice lengthy chapter!

Omg, omg, omg. Finally! My prayers have been answered! I was so scared for Seph, and wanted to kick that mutant alien bitch straight in her teeth when she used his own hand to strangle the shite out of his sexy ass. GRR! Hay! Evil mutant lady! Go get your own puppet! This one is Cloud's to manhandle. HE'S NOT YOOOUUUUUUUURRRRSSSSS! *starts yanking tentacles out*

Do aliens shrivel up like slugs if you salt them?

*Brandishes salt shaker*

I was so relieved when he was saved by the sweet and butchy Nurse Rhonda (by poppin' caps in his ass, oddly enough) I was like, "yo, this cookie-smelling phantom has possessed the strongest person on the planet, Oh shit. OH SHIT!! AAAAA savehim savehim savehim!!! Or everyone gonna DIIIIIIIIIEEEE"

teehee.

I loved this chapter. I am sure I will love your doujinshi as well, as soon as its done! I will whore that shit right up the second its released! Words cannot express my antici......pation. YOU ARE LOVED.

It's EgyptInnocence from deviantart. why was your account suspended??? do you think it might be because of that smut picture for this chapter? if so thats ridiculous and totally unfair that they wouldnt even give you a warning. if you need me to do anything, email me at SukiRios@aol.com or aim me at SukiRios

WOOT! While that chapter was a beast, it was fucking awesome! I wondered how long it would be before you updated... >.> Shouldn't talk though. I do that myself. Oops.

It was so... so sweet for Cloud to be there every day for poor unconscious Seph. Fucking stupid ass Jenova. Urgh! Anyway, and the artwork that went with that pulled at my heartstrings. Completely adorable. My favorite non-smut part: Seph being awake after Cloud's Christmas shopping. Awww~!

And of course, the beautiful smut scene. Ahh. Good things come to those who wait. No pun intended.

Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more!

Okay wow...what a great few chapters woot!
Okay the sex scene was great, so wonderful written... Hello oh wonderful perfect writer God you!! *grins*

I was like:
Oh I can't wait for them to finally do it

Wow the movie thing was so cute...Ida jumped to if Sephiroth whispered in my ear...

Cuddling with the boy toy and making out during the movie...oh I could just picture the grinding of the hips...*fans self*

OMG they are..wow...that is hot...hmmmm the perplexed look on Sephy's face over the condom...

Damn the finger prep...hot too...* fans self feverishly*

*faints* Fuck that was hot....I think my whole world would be Sephiroth to...if that God of a man wanted me....

And oh the shower scene...they gotta do it there...my biggest fantasy ever....*blushes*

*Dies* OMFG they did to it in the shower...geeish...that was really well done and I can't seem to get the images out of my head...

Can we say please do a picy of that? HUH HUH HUH HUH HUH?? You can hide all the parts....PLEASE!!!

Aww cute baby Seph...
Is curious about Vincent's intentions really... *blinks*
Is Sephiroth magical???
Cloud's mom is fantastic...

Very nice few chapters...wish I could say more and I usually can but alas my brain is in puddles thanks to you.

Thanks a Helluva lot!
-Lys

Awwww, that was yet another phenomenally awesome chapter!
I lol'd when Cloud manhandled Zack XD Also, I soooo would give an arm to see Seph in the Dior trunks :3

Kat <3

You now....I am speechless...the first scene between Cloud and Seph...(sex scene) was so well done. The humanity you have given the stoic General is so lovely. I have never read a story in which he is written as human, young, nervous, vulnerable about the same stuff any normal human would be, not to mention he is a General now and things about him are blown way out of proportions..
The way you write him almost makes me feel like I am intruding on some privacy that he wouldn't normally share and also, the way he and Cloud so openly like each other, it's all so new and like untraveled territory and I love the innocence in Cloud over it all.
I find myself wanting to see them finally have each other and yet I am so in love with the small relaxed banter between them that I really don't care. I mean the little stuff, the conversation when eating pizza, the conversation on the phone the lovely quaint "Hi" "Hello" that each seem to utter breathlessly to each other, and while Seph is saving a turtle...all if it is priceless and very warm and sweet. The miracle of your writing is that you were given a gift for it and I wish I could say more....I mean yes...the story is not played out truly cannon but who really cares, to me it's your own artistic take on it and Seph and Cloud are just perfect, to me. I adore how Cloud's mother is with him, how she supports him and the shopping thing...the lube and condoms...floored me..I should have commented on that a loooooooong time ago.

Zack is perfect as well. I laughed my butt off at the small conversation between them over the phone when it was first revealed that Seph was Gay...Zack is fricken hilarious....yo! And I know I haven't finished this story yet...but Reno and Tseng are around aren't they and do you plan on bringing Rufus around...like I said you can ignore if you have and I just haven't read it yet.

My heart broke at the Seph and Vincent scene...*cries because Sephiroth cried* But I was quickly happied up when Cloud talked to Seph on the phone again (The turtle scene).

I find myself hoarse with laughter and joy at this story...i mean I haven't stopped reading it for two days and I even re-read one chapter twice. *grins*n If I were Cloud I might find it hard to believe that I am dating a man like the General for friggin out loud...the adoration and all, the fear and authority brought on by his mere presence...but then knowing that the man is so polar opposite when alone is completely lovely....I love that side of him...the real him...not the him everyone sees....
Thanks for the great story...
-Lys

I absolutely love you now....MY GOD....I had to run to the bathroom the last few chapters...these two are like rabbits...quite adorable freaking sexy rabbits...can we say...can't get enough of each other....God I love LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY...THERE IS A GOD OUT THERE.....THANK GOODNESS!!!
Okay so I have been reading a few chapters and then reviewing...so forth...so now let's get to what I have just recently read. Hmmmm well what I thought was most funny was Zack and Sephiroth's banter in the car...and on a quick note...Sephiroths driving is hellish...scarey yet sexy...now how can that be? Any who, Cloud jumping in the car and mulling Seph to death and then Zack speaking up, truly, truly, oh my fricken God funny.
I have to say you built and built on them having sex and then the laugh from Cloud right in the middle of it...just about took me down, nearly causing me to spew my mouthful of water and OH MY GOD the cloths shopping thing, boy Sephiroth is not modest at all...meat hangin out and all..*drools* Why are those two so sexy. Again I want to comment on how real you make them both seem, real feelings, real first times, kisses that seem to melt and mold into each other...clearly you should quit your day job and just write....you have a gift!
It's the little things for me I guess, how Sephiroth acts, dresses and eats. Them ordering hotdogs was classic...."Two for him, three for me!" hehehe!
Well my goodness I'm going to read more mmk!
-Lys