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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
SO I got a question. You've kinda been hinting at Cloud 'n Seph gettin' a pet at some point...I think...so I was wondering, could it possibly be a pet like Psyco? A talking fighting animal of some kind? Cause that's be cool. I mean a normal animal would be cool to but I think it would be adorable if it was an animal that could be fasinated by an element like Psyco and his fasination with fire. Seph could entertain the lil thing for hours! ^.^ Just a thought!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
SO I got a question. You've kinda been hinting at Cloud 'n Seph gettin' a pet at some point...I think...so I was wondering, could it possibly be a pet like Psyco? A talking fighting animal of some kind? Cause that's be cool. I mean a normal animal would be cool to but I think it would be adorable if it was an animal that could be fasinated by an element like Psyco and his fasination with fire. Seph could entertain the lil thing for hours! ^.^ Just a thought!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking heart-breakingly sexy, if that even made any damn sense. ♥ Wonderful update, can't wait to see the next update. ;D
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my LANTA. Poor Cloud, but thank god Rhonda finally turned on her phone. But those doctors "All I did was ask a question!" XD And the sex was hot and sweet. All around a lovely update. =^_^=
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It occurred to me that in my haste to tell you how much I loved this chapter I left out some of my favorite parts. Okay, so I can't wait to see how Sephiroth reacts to the Porno version of him, I'd love to see how Zack acts if/when he finds out about it. And I adore the junior turks I really do. When they decided they were gonna help patch things up I went "Yay!" And then in my shower I thought about it and remembered that Vinne doesn't like Cloud. Vin doesn't like Seph being Gay either, and I went "hoshit..." So Yay you!
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD...OH MY GOD...OH MY GOD...YOU ARE A FREAKING GOD WHEN IT COMES TO WRITING....
Can I say that I have laughed and grinned so much that I was wiping my own tears from me as I read this...I know I am only half, well I don't think I am half way through yet..just got done reading the chapter where Cloud first meets Sephiroth...let's just say when Cloud asked what Sephiroth's favorite music was....I died....I freaking fainted out of my own chair. You are a delightful, awesome and perfectly well suited to write for these FFVII guys. Cloud whether or not he is OOC or stuff in character is brilliantly wrote and your description of Sephiroth just made me run to the bathroom wishing for something I couldn't have. Yeah I know I am a dork, a frickin fangirl, but who cares! And I love staring my sentences with 'And' as well....*grins*
I love your story...it makes me smile like some goofy Cloud like virgin (I am not being literal just being stupid more or less)...and I am so excited I am not done reading it yet. I love Cloud's thing for music and his persistent daydreams with Sephiroth...talk about a mind blow, I wish I had his imagination then maybe I could bring Sephy to me hehehehe *evil laughs* Two things that made me stop breathing... 1- Cloud telling Sephiroth (daydream Seph) that when he first fucks him it will be in that school outfit and Sephiroth just replying "Okie Dokie" *drools at that and doesn't know why* 2 -- Cloud asking Sephiroth what kind of music he liked and prior to that...your one line when Cloud realized he was on the monitor...and I think you said something like "and there he fucking was..." to that affect...but it was priceless and I loved it....*sighs*
Your writing is like a dream and I can't wait to read more...
Please keep it up, my writer pen name is Lysiaamazon...I write to...but I could only dream of being as good as you...
Thanks for a lovely story...*goes to read more*
-Lys
Can I say that I have laughed and grinned so much that I was wiping my own tears from me as I read this...I know I am only half, well I don't think I am half way through yet..just got done reading the chapter where Cloud first meets Sephiroth...let's just say when Cloud asked what Sephiroth's favorite music was....I died....I freaking fainted out of my own chair. You are a delightful, awesome and perfectly well suited to write for these FFVII guys. Cloud whether or not he is OOC or stuff in character is brilliantly wrote and your description of Sephiroth just made me run to the bathroom wishing for something I couldn't have. Yeah I know I am a dork, a frickin fangirl, but who cares! And I love staring my sentences with 'And' as well....*grins*
I love your story...it makes me smile like some goofy Cloud like virgin (I am not being literal just being stupid more or less)...and I am so excited I am not done reading it yet. I love Cloud's thing for music and his persistent daydreams with Sephiroth...talk about a mind blow, I wish I had his imagination then maybe I could bring Sephy to me hehehehe *evil laughs* Two things that made me stop breathing... 1- Cloud telling Sephiroth (daydream Seph) that when he first fucks him it will be in that school outfit and Sephiroth just replying "Okie Dokie" *drools at that and doesn't know why* 2 -- Cloud asking Sephiroth what kind of music he liked and prior to that...your one line when Cloud realized he was on the monitor...and I think you said something like "and there he fucking was..." to that affect...but it was priceless and I loved it....*sighs*
Your writing is like a dream and I can't wait to read more...
Please keep it up, my writer pen name is Lysiaamazon...I write to...but I could only dream of being as good as you...
Thanks for a lovely story...*goes to read more*
-Lys
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I was the one named Amanda who cried "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD " at the beginning of my review and also was the one who frigin' fell off my chair while reading it.
RUN BITCHES RUN - RUN BITCHES RUN - let's just say I couldn't breath after I read that part for I was laughin' so hard my ears were ringing...yo that was funnny funnnny stuff. I absolutely adore how you write Sephiroth...like he is an actual person and all. I mean wow...the Cloud and Sephy phone conversation was breathtaking and perfection to a tee in my book. As is I found my jaw hitting my desk in response to it all and still couldn't pick it back when I read the ending, finding out that everything Zack had done was testing and recording the young blonde. And Sephiroth....hard...after watching it...wow weee woow... I love how real you make him seem, it is just so well written it's Godly and out of this world....I still only dream of being as good as you...*smiles and hugs*
Love it!!!
-Lys
RUN BITCHES RUN - RUN BITCHES RUN - let's just say I couldn't breath after I read that part for I was laughin' so hard my ears were ringing...yo that was funnny funnnny stuff. I absolutely adore how you write Sephiroth...like he is an actual person and all. I mean wow...the Cloud and Sephy phone conversation was breathtaking and perfection to a tee in my book. As is I found my jaw hitting my desk in response to it all and still couldn't pick it back when I read the ending, finding out that everything Zack had done was testing and recording the young blonde. And Sephiroth....hard...after watching it...wow weee woow... I love how real you make him seem, it is just so well written it's Godly and out of this world....I still only dream of being as good as you...*smiles and hugs*
Love it!!!
-Lys
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eek! I loved it yet again! Absolutely fanastic :) Kudos to you!
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter! i can't believe how well you've characterized cloud and sephiroth. for once, seph's not totally stoic and all high mannered like in many other fics, but he's not totally trashy and out of character. i love this him lol. please keep writing! i check here almost everyday! then twice every day when it's been about a month since your last post :D yes, i'm a fic stalker...
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say I adore this saga! And as I read it I have utterly perfect views of how the scenes are played out in my mind!
And the way you portrayed Rufus was absolutely perfect, I can so imagine him like that :D
Fantastic work, I mean incredibly fabulous!
And the way you portrayed Rufus was absolutely perfect, I can so imagine him like that :D
Fantastic work, I mean incredibly fabulous!
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think i've read the last chapter like 5 times...as i wait impatiently for the next! good job as always! please post soon! i'll read the next chapter 6 times! lol