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Danm i am in love with this fic. im not liking the cliffy but you have to stop somewhere for the next chapter.
waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Yay it's the sephie and cloud show.
want more want more. =D annoying i know but i like.

I heard bout this story from a few friends and I have to agree with them. It is awesome!!!

OHMAIGAWD. YOU LEFT ME HANGING?! DDDD8 Poor Seph! Fucking Jenova! >.< Oooough I hate her! Poor Seph! >.< That was evil!!! I hope he's ok! I LOVE this. It always leaves me giddy.

which is bad now because it's 1:28 in the morning and I'm fuckin' wired now.

XDD And I loved the scene with Seph and Cloud in the restaurant.

Why does Vince ignore Seph?? That's so not fair!!! I love how you characterisze Seph and Cloud. And Cam. I'll write a more coherent review in the morning. o__o

I don't know who's been giving you harsh criticism, but I strongly, STRONGLY DISAGREE. I love your writing style in the beginning chapters and in the later chapters as well. I love this story soooooooooooooooooooooooooo much I cannot stand it.

Please update!


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Don't go back and rewrite it! Spend that time writing us new chapters! I loved those first chapters (since I've read most of the story up until this point all in one hit) just as much as I love these new chapters.
I hope Sephy is okay though...I wonder what Cloud will do when he finds out what Sephiroth's 'sick' actually means.

=Q~Q= I fuckin' love you~! ♥

Nuuu! Why? *teary eyes* Oh well...I suppose it was a little much to hope that she wouldn't show up at all. I can haz happy endo? *big eyes*

Damn, that was unexpected. But very good. I guess I'm pulling my hair out now until the next update. Ah...don't take those critics to hart that much. Your unique stile of writing is exactely what makes you stand out and makes this story ever so refreshing. It isn't like your everyday SephxCloud angst. That bores the hell out of me. No, you had the audacity to make Cloud the little punk bitch he is and were not scared to show a "normal" Seph with all his little imperfections and insecurities - and I fucking love you for it. Please don't ever think of re-writing this story. It would kill a lot of the spark.
On another note: I am very much hoping for more Vincent input in your story. Can't help it. I just love Mr. Broody-pants. I'm curious to see how your version of him ticks. So far I can safely say that I would like to kidnap him and chain him to my bedpost for some discipline ;) Did that sound weird? Hell...who cares *snickers* The girl in me wants to see some "family" bonding time... Oh well. You are doing so good, hun. Please keep it up.

AAAAHHHHHH!!! Cloud the drummer boy is too freaking cute for words. Also, you have left me wanting to cry my eyes out for Seph. Poor little baby! Good job at freaking me the fuck out with the Jenova thing. I think I'll be nightmaring about that for awhile. If you were trying to recreate my 8 year old fear of mirrors because I watched The Candy Man, you have done so with ACES my friend. ACES.

Poor Sephy.....*stabs Jenova* Another awesome Chapter as usual. The wait is always worth it! ^-^