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for Blonde Ambition

by sephcounttheways

person Catt
schedule March 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah Vincent. I'd call him heteronormative but I'm not sure he'd understand the term. And then he'd probably smack me. Its sweet he's trying, though.

Excellent chapter as ever. x
person Dezza
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jen. Jennifer. Jenni. I think I'll just go with love of my life, no matter how much older/younger you may be than me. (Though I think it may be older, seeing as things by way of accomplishments you've posted are far greater than mine, and I'm 21. But, you never know~)

I've decided to finally work up the courage to drop you a review, seeing as I just finished part one of BA. You may remember my name recently from DA, KiraCloud20, or may not. I just.. I feel I have to say you are an extraordinary writer. BA is by far the best SephxCloud FanFiction I've ever read. (That doesn't exclude Kittens, which I've also read most of. I was broken hearted when the girl egg was a dud. I /cried/. No FanFic has ever done that to me. >___>) I started becoming familiar with your writing on FF.NET, where I found Kittens and fell in love. Then I meandered my way here and saw BA and thought, "This is twice I've seen this story. Fate must want me to read it." And I think fate was right, because I am utterly smitten with this story, in love with no end in sight. I've been sorely tempted to spend a few dollars printing the entire thing out at the library just so I can read it over and over again. Kittens, too.

I've noticed what you said about Seme/Uke titles, and realize how many time I use those when referring to characters and upon hearing your explanation to why you don't, it makes sense. You're right. Taking in the rear is a brave feat for male or female persuasion and no one should be labelled weak just because they bottom. I adore you and your fearless (or seemingly so) way of saying just what you think. <3

I also have noticed how you say not to be disheartened by a lack of response to reviews because you're so shocked/happy/speechless at the love you receive. I'd say I get it, but I've never really gotten a review on any of my work (mainly because its not that good. I'm just not as gifted as some when it comes to writing). I'd love to hear from you though. Become freaking penpals via email, DA or Facebook. I find myself just as riveted by your AN as your story. Please don't think I'm a creeper for saying this (-feels like such a freakin' creeper-) but we've never really even talked and I feel like I've known you for-fuckin'-ever.

Anyway, love your writing, and looking forward to finishing BA. Oh, and I tried reading your doujins, but I would get to a certain point and suddenly the next links would be error messages. Just thought you should know in case no one else has mentioned it. (And it always seems to happen just when things are turning naughty. Damn! -pervert-) So yeah. /endrant. Pleasepleaseplease message me back. If you can't think of anything to say, just slam your fingers on the keyboard in a blushing frenzy! I do it every time I get a compliment of any sort. ^///^

MUCH LOVE,
Dezza~
person Paula
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww! At first, I had been afraid you wouldn't continue after you ended part one. So, I let checking up on the story slip to the bottom of my priorities. And so, in a mere two days, I went back and re-read the whole fucking thing! And I loved it more than the first time around. It's cute, funny, and real. Seeing their moments makes me happy. Really. I just wished they'd have another big fight. I find them interesting and entertaining and I adore them. If I had a say in what the fight was about, not that I do, I think it would be great if Seph got mad at Cloud for knowing about Zack and the she-demon's baby but not telling him. I just think it would play nicely into his insecurities. And it's be cute if Cloud was on winning side of an argument once. Heh. I can't fucking wait for the next chapter. GIMME!

-Paula
person Akahoshi
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are the coolest person I don't know. And I don't know *a lot* of people. I was sick when I started reading this chapter. I'm not sick anymore. That's how good this writing is. 1500 words of rim. I'll drink to that. More.
person Paula
schedule March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, Jen, more chapters!!! So reading these today.
person Yuutousei
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whoops, i'm late to the party. another wonderful chapter! just cute and jeeze ikea. that was awesome <3

person Kai
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow... okay... where to begin? Three days ago I started to read this story. I was sick out of my freaking mind and I actually read the one with Seph, Zack, and Cloud in it. And my first though was "wow... this is really OOC." Yet somehow, and trust me, I'm still trying to figure out how, I went into your story list and found Blonde Ambition. And for the three days I've been sick, I've been doing nothing but reading this story. Having to stop sometimes to lay down for a bit or my eyes threatened to pop out. At first I was really thinking I wasn't going to like the story with how OOC everyone is, but after chapter one, I found that I absolutly loved how you have everyone. It gives a fun spin to FF7/CC. After all, FF7 would have been so much more enjoyable with a more flamboyant cast and Cloud not so angsty (FF9 fan all the way. Sorry I just dont do well with ansty characters) I freakening loved your story and find myself craving for more. I dont care that it made me laugh so hard that I went into a fit of coughs then exsessive dry heaving. You will find that I'm a big fan of this and I cant wait for more. Hugs and kisses!

Kai
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gods, seriously, you are the only writer who really makes me look like some freak, whooping and snorting and laughing out loud when I read your stuff. But it's sure hellava fun doing it. I've been a long time fan and will continue to be, but please, tell me you won't end on an unhappy note. I know in cannon, Seph does die, but in my own little fluff of Cloud and Sephiroth world, they always live happy and bump rumps for ages. So what exactly are the bad stuff coming...certainly they won't just have three years together before everything blows under. Yes I read that little short of yours which you connected or blended your BA with cannon AC and I was in tears. Hopefully you'll be nice to all of your fans, but as you told me one time and i have never forgot, a write writes for themselves and what makes them happy. They write what pleases them and what they want for their story, regardless if everyone likes it or not...otherwise if you wrote to please everyone else, then it would never be what the writer truly wants. Not all stories end how we want them, but the journey of a truly amazing writer is summed up by you..as always, lovely, amazing, wonderful job dear.

*Muah* <3
-Lys :D
person Ali-chan
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey! I was quite surprised when I saw the update, but I am oh so glad to read it;p I dont know if i should tell you that, but so you can understand the importance your fic has in my life: blondeambition is actually my password for my computer, complete with avatar from your gallery, and blondeambition is also my password to a load of other things. I had to choose from a lot of story title here lol but yours was the first. love you so much!
person OshieteOkureYo
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
On your frickin' iPhone?

All love. All. See? ==> <3 Love.

Loved these chapters!