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Aaaaaaahhhh, yes. This update was so very much needed! Thank you, you saved my vacation and made me a happy happy Gismo! Soooooo, I'm glad the boys were able to work things out - quite literally. Mmmmhhh, there ain't nothing like a good hot shower ;)I absolutely squealed with delight over the Vincent interlude. It's good to see he cares about his not-son. Poor confused Emo Turk, though. Failed him because he turned out gay? Tsk tsk. *grabs brick to wash his head*
I am curious what Mr. Broody Pants will come up with in the future. So thank you again for this refreshing chapter and keep up the good work, oh Awesomness!

Greetings, my beloved authoress! I was near orgasmic with delight when I saw you'd updated, mostly because I was bizzarely and unnaturally curious and anxious as to the aftermath of our boys' first time going all the way. I was delighted at the way you handled the situation with poor Cloud's insecurity. And I was glad they solved it so soon, since it would have been a shame to just let the matter fester. The following shower sex was the cause for a dopey expression that included glazed, half-lidded eyes, slack facial muscles, and (though in VERY small amounts, for the record) drool dribbling from a slightly ajar mouth. All in all, great work. I hope Cloud and Seph get to have more fights dash misunderstandings in the future, if the make up sex is as hot every time! Ohohohohoho!...Anyway, I really appreciated the second half of the chapter, the one describing more of Sephiroth's past in the labs and Vincent's involvement. I gotta say though, Vincent's reaction at seeing Seph kiss Cloud disappointed me bitterly. I'm sure you have you reasons though, and I'm not about to bitch/flame at you to make you change anything at all. I respect you as an author too much for that. So, congrats on a wonderfully written chapter, and I hope to get to read more sometime soon! Kisses!

Ah!! An update!! YAY!!!!! I loved it. The little insight into Sephiroth's life in the lab and Vincent coming to the rescue was genius. So many people make it seem like that sort of thing never happened to Seph. Poor guy. All his suffering for nothing.....


Keep it coming!!

Horror! Oh noes! It started off all nice and cosy too. Poor mini-Cloud :( I don’t know who I feel more sorry for – Cloud for not having his love returned fully, or Sephy, who probably *wants* to love Cloud, but for whatever reason is having hang-ups about it? Hmm – well at the very least (and obviously their relationship will never be the very least) Cloud knows that he will forever be the one to steal the great general’s V-card? ;) Cloud is so his worst enemy. Ruminating on such unpleasant thoughts can so *not* be good for the kid’s ego :S Oh no. Cloud you silly boy. You neeed to stop lying! This is never a good thing in the beginning of a new relationship! Smarten up kiddo – he likes you, just give him a chance to turn that into recognizable love! Getting all snarky is not going to help matters! I feel bad for Seph – he seems to be genuinely puzzled – and if my lover became all withdrawn and cry-y right after we first had sex… well – I’d probably take it personally?

Awwwww – and just like that you turn me into a ball of fangirlish goo again :) Sephy is brilliant. Just horribly brilliant at being perfect. You give him a situation with no way to win, and he’ll find one – or at the very least manage a tie :D Impressive General, Impressive.

Hot. Very, very hot. And ouch on the head meets shower wall Cloud hunni. Ouch.

Haha – slippery!

LMAO. Oh that is too funny. Poor little Cloud’s hand! Gluts of steel!

He… turned green? :D LOLZ – what is up with him? He’s crazy superhuman!

. . . Children creep me out :S Village of the Damned ftw! Vincent is the most adorable non-kidperson, kidperson ever :D Holy wow did he go through Hell to make Sephy’s life just slightly better :D Awwww – he’s a softie under it all :) Ohhhh lucky one Cloud! That was too close!

Noooooo! Why is Vinnie a hater? Poop! And everything was going so well to! I did love the bit about their shared past though. And Confused Hojo equals Win. =^_^=

PS: You write really heart string-tugging angst, you know that?

Oh, god, in heaven... blessed is your name. For bringing me happiness and distraction in the form of this effing talented writer/artist/superhuman... THIS MY FIRST REVIEW ON THIS SITE!!! Woo!

Here's the actual review. You. Are. Spectacular. Funny as shit, talented as all get out. More, I say. MORE!!!!

This story is now officially my "Feel Good" Story. I started reading it this morning, and actually felt happy and sexy when I left for my job interview...Which is weird for me, the sexy, not the happy...nevermind, ignore the babble. ANYway I love everything about this fic and I will admit that I laughed for about five minutes straight at the "Run bitches, RUN!" story. Now every time I think I about it I giggle. And like Seph, I hope those were happy tears. You are amazing. =^_^=

Oooooooohhhh, I need an update!!!! PLEEEEEEASE, please, please....*repeats until drops down unconcious* Am I too pushy? Am I too demanding? Do I have to bribe you with cookies? Chocolate? A free trip to Barbados???? Name your terms and I'd be happy to comply! ;)
No, seriousely: I'm suffering from extreme withdrawal syndrome and can't wait for the next chappie.
*uses secret weapon "Kicked Puppy Eyes"*

Love this chapter especially the dressing room scene. Too bad Seph had to ruin it at the end. I really could have sworn he loved Cloud, maybe he just can't say it yet or something. And yup once again I checked out the chapter pics, god could Seph get any hotter, had me thinking if only the apron was lower. And Cloud looks so cute in his uniform better than I pictured it. And even though it wasn't part of the story I absolutely love the Bathroom Fun pic especially the hair; I could totally see Cloud doing Seph's eyebrows. Anyway I just realized that I totally deviated off the subject of the chapter, I really like the time that Seph and Cloud spend together in your fic their conversations always turn out to be amusing. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Hiya!! I love this story!! You know, with skills like this, you should write pro! Really!! Keep it up I look forward to more!