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Ok, it's taken like..7 times rereading this but I finally get the Jiffy pop thing. When you told me what it was I thought, "So he that little plastic black thing in his mouth, wtf?" Then I realized..Oh, Jiffy pop is referring to the popcorn itself..Ugh. I'm hopeless. This should be natural human knowledge. But anyway, I never gave you an actual review! =D

You have the uncanny ability to make me almost cry during a sex scene, because..it was so..touching. Not hardcore sexy like usual. It was sweet. Cloud's absolute desperation is so adorable. I love him. <3 I'm missing Cameron though, and..I think Cloud should listen to The Fratellis. =x And including the science department's Seph-obsession into the story at all amazes me. How do you do that crap? I hope this will be one long sunovabitch. :D

LMFAO OMG I love this story so much. I have been following it for a while and I have to say between this chapter (12) and the last, I don't know which one cracked me up more. The car ride with Zack had me rolling on the floor laughing. And I loved Psychic Food. Why can't a place like that really exist?

YAY CHAPTER 12!!!!! *does a happy dance* I soooooooooo love the newest chapter!!! I was laughin my butt off when seph and zack we're "fightin" in the car, gods was that funny as hell LOL. But I feel soooooooooooooo sorry for cloud. He just told seph he loves him and all he got was "I value you"....wtf?!! Pooooooor cloudy!!! *crys for cloud* Ahh I am soooo in love with this story....can't wait for the next chapter as always lol. ^___^

After 12 chapters, Cloud and Sephy are laid. oh the love, too bad Sephy couldn't say I love you.......poor Cloud.

Awesome chapter, I hope you post sooner( your Fanfic is the only one I come to AdultFanfic to read)

Ouch, that last statement felt like a sucker-punch even for me. Poor little Cloud. I'm crying with him.
I waited so long for this chapter, coming here everyday to check for any news and OF COURSE when I was on a business-trip to Copenhagen for two days with no WLAN access you decided to update. Muhahahaha, the irony. But anyway, I absolutely ADORE this chapter. The fetish stuff had me in stitches and..well...YAY...those cherries are finally popped. But that ending...*sniffs unhappily* Oh I feel some drama coming. Now I will be even more desperate than before until your next update. By the way, your artwork is simply breathtaking. I LURVE the fetish one. They both look absolutely delishious - in their unique ways! Thank you for another refreshing episode of those two major hotties. Keep up the great work. I enjoy every second of it! *hugs*

They both got laid! Yay! About time as Zack would say.

But the ending. Poor Cloud, that really hurts I guess. Though I'm sure Seph has some sort of affection for him. Still -represses urge to cuddle Cloud-. I see drama in the future. X3

See, you got me all twitchy for an update.

Awesome job, and I'm stalking your dA account too.

Dawww, poor Seph, not being able to say the word "love" to Cloud! Poor baby doesn't know what love is, having never had it. Shinra as his last name though...ew...Of course, Hojo as his last name is even more EEEEEEWW!

I have no idea whether to squeal your metaphorical ears off in fangirlish semi-delusional glee, or gurgle pathetically out of my puddle of blood! Heh, in case that was a little too disturbing, I'll translate. I LOVED this chapter! First of all, I was ecstatic to see a large part of it written from Sephiroth's perspective. Yay! We got a better glimpse of his inner-pervert! That was...enlightening. Second of all, they finally did it. Need I say more? The ending was a little on the bittersweet side, but I guess it was all just too unfaniliar to poor, pretty much emotionally-stunted Sephiroth. I loved the scene with Cloud jumping his bones in Zack's presence, by the way. Very amusing. You definitely succeeded in writing a fun story and more, I'll give you that with a cherry on top! In anycase, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. You kind of left a little cliffhanger there. Kisses!

-spazzes- omg an update!!! xD nothing like a hot steaming cup of yaoi after a long day! Love the update doll, cant wait for the next installment! <333

Very interesting fic. I like especially the friendship between Sephiroth and Zack. Very abusive, hahaha.

There is a special section for Sephiroth/Cloud and Cloud/Sephiroth fanfiction now, by the way, if you wish to put your fanfic in a more specific place.