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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Value?! Hells no. Wrong answer kiddo. Although . . . at least he was honest about it? Shoot though. That's gotta hurt. Poor kid :( Awesome chapter though. I really liked their hanging out. Just too cute with the dressing game and back at the appt was hot! :D Absolutely adorable! :D
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wtf is a Jiffy pop?
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I just love re-reading this lovely piece of art!!! It always makes me giggle in some or most chapters lol. Anyways once again I love ur work!! Please update soon!!!! ^_________^
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! I... FUCKING -no wait, excuse me- FAWKING... LOVE YOU!!! I love your style, your humor, your characterizations, your... everything!
I'm not quite sure when my feelings progressed to undying love, but I know what made me realize it. Chapter 10, Author note #7: "If you have to ask, you'll never know." This Rugrats quote has always stayed with me for some reason. And for someone else to actually remember it... and then use it... what words can convey, the joy of this day?! Thank you kindly!
I'm not quite sure when my feelings progressed to undying love, but I know what made me realize it. Chapter 10, Author note #7: "If you have to ask, you'll never know." This Rugrats quote has always stayed with me for some reason. And for someone else to actually remember it... and then use it... what words can convey, the joy of this day?! Thank you kindly!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before!(*apologies for any mistakes in my English!)
I have been in love with this story from the first chapter. Cloud is a sexy, witty, devious kitten and Sephiroth is the coolest, most chilled-out hot virgin bastard ever! I adore the way you're writing the conversations between SephyxCloud and Mom and the junior. They are full of life and so unbelievably funny sometimes! Just like this chapter: I knew April wouldn't go easy on Sephy, she was great:D My other two favorite scenes of this chapter were Aeris smoking cigs among her precious flowers and of course Cloud being attacked by lesbian Turks - his whole scenario about what happens when he dies left me laughing so hard, I almost cried :D And the lemon was just right, it felt right anyway *grins* Thank you so much, can't wait for more :) (love the pic of Sephy moving the turtle, so cute!)
I have been in love with this story from the first chapter. Cloud is a sexy, witty, devious kitten and Sephiroth is the coolest, most chilled-out hot virgin bastard ever! I adore the way you're writing the conversations between SephyxCloud and Mom and the junior. They are full of life and so unbelievably funny sometimes! Just like this chapter: I knew April wouldn't go easy on Sephy, she was great:D My other two favorite scenes of this chapter were Aeris smoking cigs among her precious flowers and of course Cloud being attacked by lesbian Turks - his whole scenario about what happens when he dies left me laughing so hard, I almost cried :D And the lemon was just right, it felt right anyway *grins* Thank you so much, can't wait for more :) (love the pic of Sephy moving the turtle, so cute!)
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I was your 69th reviewer~ whee.
I love this chapter. I love how you portrayed the differences in Cloud's and Sephiroth's sexual attitudes. I adore Cloud's hysterics- it's just so offbeat. Aeris is a smoker caught me off-guard, but it's a refreshing change. Cam is adorable per usual. Julie and Elena are such lesbian loves. I'm glad your version of Sephiroth has such cool friends. And respects to Mama Strife, she's totally made of awesome!
My favourite bit in the whole thing? When Seph declares he's gonna keep Cloud. Awwww.
Your DA pictures totally rocks too.
I love this chapter. I love how you portrayed the differences in Cloud's and Sephiroth's sexual attitudes. I adore Cloud's hysterics- it's just so offbeat. Aeris is a smoker caught me off-guard, but it's a refreshing change. Cam is adorable per usual. Julie and Elena are such lesbian loves. I'm glad your version of Sephiroth has such cool friends. And respects to Mama Strife, she's totally made of awesome!
My favourite bit in the whole thing? When Seph declares he's gonna keep Cloud. Awwww.
Your DA pictures totally rocks too.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's very well written! It sucks that I read it in it's entirety practically in one night and now have to wait for an update x,x; This story is like crack-- give me more! xD Love your DA pic's too. :3 <33333 Hope to read an update soon!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for setting the anon reviews for me! Finally, I can spread the love on this hot mother. I'm a cadet, so this stuff is like drugs for me. Military smut, hell yes! You win the award for best characterization for pre-Crisis Cloud. People are begining to wonder why I'm suddenly unexplainably into SWAT team memebers...
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Seph/Cloud moments in this chapter. And between the ladies at the restaurant and Cloud's mom the fucking had me rolling. This chapter has to be one of my favorites, then again I've said that for everyone of the previous chapters, see the trend. But yeah I am so happy mama was in this chapter, I swear she is a fucking riot. Even if things don't come around with Vincent, Seph has a nice family there with Cloud and mom. And I see that Cloud was more daring and bolder in this chapter in regards to intimacies with Seph, I liked it. Loved this chapter, looking forward to the next one.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, love! God, I had fun with this chapter! It made my day, it really did. I mean, I haven't seen a better FFVII story on this site! Only Green Dreams comes close to it. And I don't mean just the ideas, but the writing style and overall feeling of the fic too. I loved the interaction between Aeris and Seph. And Aeris smoking? I cackled like a mad hyena at that. I mean, I've never seen that side of Aeris anywhere else before! What a stroke of originality that was! And overprotective Elena, Julie, and April (though for different people)! That was too sweet (in a slightly morbid sort of way) for words. And I think you have every right to be proud of your lemons. They make me happy. Vry, very happy! Mwahahahaha!...Um, 'scuse me. Anyway, keep it up, hon! Kisses!