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OMG!! I am soooooooooooo in love with your fanfic!!! It's sooooooooooooo cute and sexy!!! Please update soon!! Can't wait 2 see somemore hot and sexy CloudxSeph-ness!! Lol You are soooooooooo awesome for writting this btw!! LUV U!!! *glomps* ^___^

The lemon wasn't nasty, it was fucking hot! And you stopped at the blowjob...lol DAMN!!!
We want MORE!!!!
Nah, seriousely, that was another one of your awesome chapters. I love those boys. The way you created these characters is simply brilliant. I love their down-to-earth behaviour. This story is so refreshingly different from all other CloudxSeph pairings. I am going through serious pains until each update. There are only very few pieces of literary gemstones that have the right to be called that - and yor work is clearly amongst them. Absolutely wonderful. So hurry the fuck up, I wanna read more!
Just playing. Take your time and make it good. And hot. And sour. ;)
Jesus...I write like a first-grader...

I loved this chapter... I have been checking every few days for updates and I'm so happy there was one today. They are too adorable and are honestly my favorite couple. *Sighs dreamily* Man what I wouldn't give to get my hands on Sephy. I'd probably get on his nerves though wanting to comb or brush his hair all the time *giggles* Oh and I have to say I about died of laughter at the phone call from Cloud's mom... now THAT was unexpected. Great job and I look forward to the next update.

Hey, hun! Sorry for not reviewing earlier - I was going to last night, but just as I got the review box up, I had to go on a plagiarist hunt, so all the awesome bubbles you gave me were gone. This was such an awesome chapter, though! I love the differences between Seph and Cloud - I laughed out loud at Cloud's fave movie, it's *definitely* him. The coolest part of this exploration of each other that they're doing is that we end up getting to know more of Seph's backstory! I am *loving* reading about him, and the wingspan thing! Oh, man, that was so precious! This image in my head of lanky Seph flapping his arms and knocking the walls! I loved seeing that end report of chapter nine being lived out in this one - haha, and Clooouuuuud, with the luuuuube! Oh, man, you embarrass that boy so well. Cam once again earned my undying love - haha, those rumours were fantastic. The thing I adore with your writing is the mental images you create - seeing Cloud leap-frog that guy for the phone, seeing it all so *clearly* in my head. It's so vivid, I always end up slipping from 'reading' to 'experiencing'. And VINCE! You nearly killed me! I was taking a mouthful of water, and I have no idea why, but his entrance made me choke on it! I exploded this laughter-water all over my goddamn monitor! It was so wonderful to see him in this, I love the realism you give your characters. It's so easy to see them as real people. Oh, and last but not least - the tripod thing. Ohhhh, the tripod. Especially when the guy looks him up and down, and Cloud asks suspiciously what he'd just thought of XD Well, if Seph thinks of tripod, surely that's a good sign for Cloud? Despite his embarrassment in the last chapter?
I'm sending as many good vibes as I can for you, hun - forceful heart transplant is never a healthy thing. It's good to hear you're being positive about it, but it doesn't really take away the suckiness. I am now yours for life!

Okay this'll have to be short and to the point because I'm fricking exhausted and have to work early this morning - that said, this chapter was awesome! :D Serious wow going on - loved all the back story on Seph. Definately helped round him out into less of the two dimensional mythic hero of the first few chapters, turning him into a more complex deliciously sexy bishie with an interesting history? Score. Those two are bloody adorable btw. Ohhh also very happy about Vincent! I have a special place in my heart of hearts reserved for all time with Vincent's name on it and it was great to see him introduced here! I really do want to know more about their common past though :) So cute. Oh and it made me laugh about Seph knowing they were being observed, and the going through the backpack, and the selective divulging of information, etc etc etc. Way too many parts to rhyme off now :P Oh on a side note - I'm not sure if you've been in contact with . . . shoot what name is she going by on this site . . . ummm carmine crinoline I believe? Something like that? I believe she is lemon betaing for you? Anywho just in case she hasn't been in contact and you have been trying to reach her I know her computer apparently 'died a horrible, horrible death' or somesuch and was out to be fixed for the last little while so if you have been trying to get in contact and it hasn't been working that's probably why. She was supposed to get it back soon though so have no fears ;) Ummm not that you would be likely to have further quesions but I can be reached at decorinne@hotmail.com in any case. Koolio. Awesome chapter --> Can't wait for the next one! :D Great way to de-stress after a truly energy zapping day! :D :D :D :D :D

*Gets an evil glint in her eyes as she runs off out of sight with a rather LARGE needle*
A loud popping noise is heard off somewhere, followed by "MWAHAHA! The Fic's '69 review virginity' is Miiinnneee!!"

Oh my gaaaaawd. The car incident had me in stitches. I was laughing tears for fucking five minutes. I was able to restart breathing shortly before my significant other was calling the paramedics. Oh dear, this chapter was awesome! And the cockroaches....bahahahahahaha. We can't forget about the cockroaches. I was almost peeing myself. Your style is simply the best and I cannot get enough from my two favourite boys. Don't worry, we can wait for da lemons. The motor mouth of Cloud and Sephy's naughtyness (the old perv...)makes the wait bearable ;)
Ummmm, on a more private note: I'm sending you loads and loads of positive vibes and a brand new substitute heart. Oh, and cookies. And a hug.

Woah it feels like I’m in love! :D You are a great writer, and the story is beyond amazing!!

Before I start... *bottles all the good vibes from the fic and hands over to the author and squishes her*. Yeah, I know how painful a forced heart transplant is, *send hugs and cookies.*

The fic is t3h awesome per usual, a few spelling mistakes here and there. God I'm in love with your Seph and Cloud, they are so whacked out and yet so real. I love how vulnerable Seph is, especially on that bit about Vincent, and how he realizes he's already in love with the blond space cadet. The cockroach and turtles were off tangent but damn cute, Cloud's right when he mentions Seph's totally random, I was lol'ing my ass off at the cockroaches getting freaked out. "It's not a hair gel!" is just too precious a moment. Methinks the General wants some ass after 2 weeks in Junon.

Thanks for updating in the midst of an emotional upheaval, I hope things will look up soon.

Hey, love. Before I start commenting on this much longed for chapter, I would like to send you every good vibe in my current possession! And that's a lot. I won't say anything else; I think we both know life has its ups and downs, one always after the other. So. I freakin' loved this! Mwahahahahaha! I really liked the fact that you picked up from where we left Cloud and Seph in the last chapter, and elaborated on the events connected with the truck and the parking lot. As usual, your sense of humor left me in stitches from helpless laughter (at times transformed into semi-sane cackling). The glimpse of Seph's past (his relationship with Vincent, how he found his apartment, etc.) was a lovely touch, by the way. It gave depth to his character and realism to the story itself. It showed the General's humanity more clearly. I love the chats Seph and Cloud have. It's nice to see them getting to know each other outside of the bedroom (though that's VERY nice too). Overall, this chapter was totally worth the wait, and I'm looking forward to the next one! Kisses!